r712 - html/trunk/clfs

Randy McMurchy randy at linuxfromscratch.org
Mon Jan 16 15:09:16 PST 2006


Justin R. Knierim wrote these words on 01/16/06 16:50 CST:

> A few suggestions.
> 
> s/built from on/built from an/  (or maybe "built from any"?)
> s/tested from building from Solaris/tested to build from Solaris/
> 
> The first one is a typo, the second one just personal preference.  :)

Justin,

These are gross grammatical errors. You should fix them without
suggesting anything. You are more of a web site maintainer than
just about anyone. If there is poor grammar and spelling errors,
they should be fixed as soon as they are discovered. Just do it. :-)

BTW, it is considered better form to say "a Unix box" than "an
Unix box". It is not a hard-fast rule that says an before vowels
and a before consonants.

Also, BSD's is not possessive here, it should be BSDs, or something
else that gets the point across.

-- 
Randy

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