r712 - html/trunk/clfs

Justin R. Knierim justin at knierim.org
Mon Jan 16 14:50:53 PST 2006

jim at linuxfromscratch.org wrote:

>+     <p><em>CLFS can be built from on Unix Style Operating System</em><br />
>+        You can build CLFS even if you don't have Linux running. Our build
>+	instructions have been tested from building from Solaris and the BSD's.</p>
A few suggestions.

s/built from on/built from an/  (or maybe "built from any"?)
s/tested from building from Solaris/tested to build from Solaris/

The first one is a typo, the second one just personal preference.  :)


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