r375 - in html/trunk: . lfs

justin at linuxfromscratch.org justin at linuxfromscratch.org
Tue Jul 5 13:32:14 PDT 2005


Author: justin
Date: 2005-07-05 14:32:13 -0600 (Tue, 05 Jul 2005)
New Revision: 375

Modified:
   html/trunk/contribute.html
   html/trunk/index.html
   html/trunk/lfs/read.html
Log:
[www2] Text corrections as suggested by Matthew Burgess.

Modified: html/trunk/contribute.html
===================================================================
--- html/trunk/contribute.html	2005-07-05 20:16:46 UTC (rev 374)
+++ html/trunk/contribute.html	2005-07-05 20:32:13 UTC (rev 375)
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
 
        <h2>Become a mirror</h2>
        <p>You can assist the LFS project by providing a mirror for HTTP and/or FTP.  HTTP
-          consists of the xhtml, books, patches and hints, while FTP consists of packages,
+          consists of the XHTML, books, patches and hints, while FTP consists of packages,
           patches and tarballs thereof.
        </p>
           <h4>HTTP Mirror</h4>
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
              <a href="mailto:justin@knierim.org">Justin Knierim</a>     
              or 
              <a href="mailto:tim@angelinacounty.net">Tim Jackson</a>
-             to receive a rsync time.  Please include the following information as well:
+             to receive an rsync time.  Please include the following information as well:
           </p>
           <ul>
              <li>Location (City and Country)</li>

Modified: html/trunk/index.html
===================================================================
--- html/trunk/index.html	2005-07-05 20:16:46 UTC (rev 374)
+++ html/trunk/index.html	2005-07-05 20:32:13 UTC (rev 375)
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
      <h1>Welcome to Linux From Scratch!</h1>
      <p>Linux From Scratch (LFS) is a project that provides you with
         step-by-step instructions for building your own custom Linux system,
-        entirely from source.
+        entirely from source code.
      </p>
 
      <p>Currently, the Linux From Scratch organization consists of the following
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
 	<li><a href="hlfs/">HLFS</a> :: Hardened Linux From Scratch focuses on building an LFS system with heightened
 	security.</li>
 	<li><a href="hints/">Hints</a> :: The Hints project is a collection of documents that explain how to enhance your LFS system in ways that are not included in the LFS or BLFS books.</li>
-	<li><a href="livecd/">LiveCD</a> :: The LiveCD project provides a cd that is useful as an LFS build host or as a general rescue cd.</li>
+	<li><a href="livecd/">LiveCD</a> :: The LiveCD project provides a CD that is useful as an LFS build host or as a general rescue CD.</li>
 	<li><a href="patches/">Patches</a> :: The Patches project serves as a central repository for all patches useful to an LFS user.</li>
      </ul>
 <!--#include virtual="/common/footer.html" -->

Modified: html/trunk/lfs/read.html
===================================================================
--- html/trunk/lfs/read.html	2005-07-05 20:16:46 UTC (rev 374)
+++ html/trunk/lfs/read.html	2005-07-05 20:32:13 UTC (rev 375)
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 <!--#include virtual="menu.html" -->
     <div class="main">
      <h1>Read the Linux From Scratch Book Online</h1>
-     <p>Three versions of the LFS Book are available for viewing online, the current stable released book, the testing 
+     <p>Three versions of the LFS Book are available for viewing online, the stable released book, the testing 
 	book, and the daily rendered development book:</p>
 
      <h2>Current Stable</h2>




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