cvs commit: www/test/cgi-bin lfscounter.cgi

Bill's LFS Login lfsbill at wlmcs.com
Thu Aug 21 14:40:36 PDT 2003


On Thu, 21 Aug 2003 jeroen at linuxfromscratch.org wrote:

> jeroen      03/08/21 13:50:44
>
>   Modified:    test/cgi-bin lfscounter.cgi
>   Log:
>   Update the counter for the new titles and menu entries and make it validate again.
>
>   Revision  Changes    Path
>   1.7       +3 -3      www/test/cgi-bin/lfscounter.cgi
>
>   Index: lfscounter.cgi
>   ===================================================================
>   RCS file: /home/cvsroot/www/test/cgi-bin/lfscounter.cgi,v
>   retrieving revision 1.6
>   retrieving revision 1.7
><snip>

>   -<p><a id="query"></a>You can query the database to look for a particular userid, name or
>   +<p id="query">You can query the database to look for a particular userid, name or
>    first lfs version used, or any combination of these. Just hitting the Query
>    button without filling anything will result in the entire LFS users
>    database to be shown.</p>

Minor, but more natural  - s/filling/entering/

and something closer to one of these will read better

s/database to be shown/database being shown/

-- or maybe --

# Had to break the line - heads up!

s/result in the entire LFS users database to be shown/
show the entire LFS users database/

-- 
Bill Maltby
lfsbill at wlmcs.com



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