RFC: HLFS Mission Statement

Bill's LFS Login lfsbill at nospam.dot
Fri Mar 5 06:47:24 PST 2004


On Thu, 4 Mar 2004, Archaic wrote:

Attached a few minor punctuation suggestions.

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Bill Maltby
lfsbillATearthlinkDOTnet
Fix line above & use it to mail me direct.
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     - providing guidance to basic security policy that may be most
       appropriate to given environments, configurations and applications;
     - demonstrating procedures, processes and commands that implement the
-      selected policy on a platform produced via the (B)LFS books;
+      selected policy on a platform produced via the (B)LFS books.
 
     Exploit-ability of OS components will be reduced by:
     - discussing common weaknesses of OS components;
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
     - monitor (B)LFS list activity for advance notice of changes;
     - minimize maintenance effort from (B)LFS book activity by carefully
       selecting what to include directly and what to reference;
-    - "release" as close as reasonable to a new (B)LFS book release;
+    - "release" as close as reasonable to a new (B)LFS book release.
 
     To use the (B)LFS books as a foundation, the team will:
     - incorporate certain parts of those books, when needed for clarity
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
     - avoid unneeded repetition of (B)LFS book contents;
     - make liberal use of references to those books, and other pertinent
       resources, when such references are relevant to the topic at hand
-      (but outside the scope of the book) and will enhance its value;
+      (but outside the scope of the book) and will enhance its value.
 
 Logistics
     Due to the enormity of the subject matter, workload associated with


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