r8828 - trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils

randy at linuxfromscratch.org randy at linuxfromscratch.org
Fri Jan 21 06:12:35 PST 2011


Author: randy
Date: 2011-01-21 07:12:30 -0700 (Fri, 21 Jan 2011)
New Revision: 8828

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/cmake.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/libarchive.xml
Log:
Minor tweaks

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/cmake.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/cmake.xml	2011-01-20 19:52:11 UTC (rev 8827)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/cmake.xml	2011-01-21 14:12:30 UTC (rev 8828)
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
     <title>Introduction to CMake</title>
 
     <para>The <application>CMake</application> package contains a modern toolset used
-    for generating <filename>Makefiles</filename>. It is a successor of the auto-generated
+    for generating <filename>Makefile</filename>s. It is a successor of the auto-generated
     <command>configure</command> script.</para>
 
     &lfs67_checked;
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@
     <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Required</bridgehead>
     <para role="required">
     <xref linkend="curl"/>, 
-    <xref linkend="libarchive"/> and 
+    <xref linkend="libarchive"/>, and 
     <xref linkend="expat"/>
     </para>
 
@@ -103,8 +103,8 @@
     <title>Command Explanations</title>
 
     <para><option>--system-libs</option>: This option forces the build system
-    to link against <application>zlib</application>, <application>bzip2</application>, 
-    <application>curl</application> and <application>expat</application> installed 
+    to link against <application>Zlib</application>, <application>Bzip2</application>, 
+    <application>cURL</application> and <application>Expat</application> installed 
     on the system.</para>
 
   </sect2>
@@ -113,14 +113,15 @@
     <title>Contents</title>
 
     <segmentedlist>
-      <segtitle>Installed Program</segtitle>
-      <segtitle>Installed Library</segtitle>
-      <segtitle>Installed Directory</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Programs</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Libraries</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
 
       <seglistitem>
-        <seg>ctest, cpack, ccmake and cmake</seg>
-        <seg></seg>
-        <seg>/usr/share/cmake-&cmake-version;, /usr/share/doc/cmake-&cmake-version;</seg>
+        <seg>ctest, cpack, ccmake, and cmake</seg>
+        <seg>None</seg>
+        <seg>/usr/share/cmake-&cmake-version; and
+        /usr/share/doc/cmake-&cmake-version;</seg>
       </seglistitem>
     </segmentedlist>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/libarchive.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/libarchive.xml	2011-01-20 19:52:11 UTC (rev 8827)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/libarchive.xml	2011-01-21 14:12:30 UTC (rev 8828)
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
 
     <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Optional</bridgehead>
     <para role="optional">
-    <xref linkend="libxml2"/> or <xref linkend="expat"/>,
+    <xref linkend="libxml2"/> or <xref linkend="expat"/>, and
     <xref linkend="xz-utils"/>
     </para>
 
@@ -98,14 +98,14 @@
     <title>Contents</title>
 
     <segmentedlist>
-      <segtitle>Installed Program</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Programs</segtitle>
       <segtitle>Installed Library</segtitle>
-      <segtitle>Installed Directory</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
 
       <seglistitem>
-        <seg>bsdtar, bsdcpio</seg>
+        <seg>bsdtar and bsdcpio</seg>
         <seg>libarchive.{so,a}</seg>
-        <seg></seg>
+        <seg>None</seg>
       </seglistitem>
     </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@
       <varlistentry id="bsdtar">
         <term><command>bsdtar</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>is a tool like the GNU tar.</para>
+          <para>is a tool similar to GNU <command>tar</command>.</para>
           <indexterm zone="libarchive bsdtar">
             <primary sortas="b-bsdtar">bsdtar</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@
       <varlistentry id="bsdcpio">
         <term><command>bsdcpio</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>is a tool like cpio.</para>
+          <para>is a tool similar to <command>cpio</command>.</para>
           <indexterm zone="libarchive bsdcpio">
             <primary sortas="b-bsdcpio">bsdcpio</primary>
           </indexterm>




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