r7901 - in trunk/BOOK: . basicnet/netlibs introduction/welcome

Randy McMurchy randy at linuxfromscratch.org
Wed Jul 29 07:08:49 PDT 2009


wblaszcz at linuxfromscratch.org wrote:
> Author: wblaszcz
> Date: 2009-07-29 07:47:52 -0600 (Wed, 29 Jul 2009)
> New Revision: 7901
>
>      <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Required</bridgehead>
> -    <para role="required"><xref linkend="glib2"/> and
> +    <para role="required"><xref linkend="glib2"/>, and
>      <xref linkend="libxml2"/></para>

The use of a comma in a list of two items is discouraged. The "and"
is adequate.

>  
> +    <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Recommended</bridgehead>
> +    <para role="recommended"><xref linkend="libproxy"/>, and
> +    <xref linkend="sqlite"/></para>

I think we are overusing the Recommended dependencies. Why are
these recommended. I think we should identify why they are
recommended (parenthetical after the list would suffice).

Also, ditto the use of a comma.

-- 
Randy




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