r7831 - in trunk/BOOK: basicnet/connect basicnet/mailnews basicnet/netprogs general/genutils general/graphlib general/prog postlfs/security pst/printing server/major server/other x/installing xsoft/graphweb xsoft/office xsoft/other

gdalziel at linuxfromscratch.org gdalziel at linuxfromscratch.org
Mon Jul 6 12:12:40 PDT 2009


Author: gdalziel
Date: 2009-07-06 13:12:40 -0600 (Mon, 06 Jul 2009)
New Revision: 7831

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/basicnet/connect/connect.xml
   trunk/BOOK/basicnet/connect/ppp.xml
   trunk/BOOK/basicnet/mailnews/mailx.xml
   trunk/BOOK/basicnet/mailnews/procmail.xml
   trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/subversion.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/genutils/graphviz.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/graphlib/lcms.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/prog/guile.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/prog/other-tools.xml
   trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/gnupg2.xml
   trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/mitkrb.xml
   trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/openssl.xml
   trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/shadow.xml
   trunk/BOOK/pst/printing/lprng.xml
   trunk/BOOK/server/major/openssh.xml
   trunk/BOOK/server/other/openldap.xml
   trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x-setup.xml
   trunk/BOOK/xsoft/graphweb/firefox.xml
   trunk/BOOK/xsoft/graphweb/seamonkey.xml
   trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/abiword.xml
   trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/evolution.xml
   trunk/BOOK/xsoft/other/thunderbird.xml
Log:
fixed typos on several pages

Modified: trunk/BOOK/basicnet/connect/connect.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/basicnet/connect/connect.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/basicnet/connect/connect.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
   DHCP, you will need a DHCP client in order to connect to it.</para>
 
   <para>PPP stands for Point-to-Point Protocol. It is data link protocol
-  commonly used for establishing an authenticated IP connections over
+  commonly used for establishing authenticated IP connections over
   a phone line with a modem, or over radio waves with a cellular phone. There
   is also a variant (PPPoE) that works over Ethernet and is used by cable
   providers to authenticate the Internet connections.</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/basicnet/connect/ppp.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/basicnet/connect/ppp.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/basicnet/connect/ppp.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@
     <command>make</command> command to compile in support for IPv6.</para>
 
     <para><parameter>CBCP=y</parameter>: Add this argument to the
-    <command>make</command> command to compile in support for
+    <command>make</command> command to compile in support for the
     Microsoft proprietary Callback Control Protocol.</para>
 
   </sect2>
@@ -165,9 +165,9 @@
       <ulink url="http://alumnit.ca/wiki/?WvDial">WvDial</ulink>
       or <application>KPPP</application> from
       <xref linkend="kdenetwork"/>. The text below explains how to set up
-      dialup and GPRS and PPPoE connections using only tools provided with
+      dialup, GPRS and PPPoE connections using only tools provided with
       the <application>PPP</application> package. All configuration steps
-      in this section are executed as
+      in this section are executed as the
       <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user.</para>
 
       <para>Add the users who may run <application>PPP</application> to the
@@ -216,7 +216,7 @@
 chmod 755 /etc/ppp/ip-up</userinput></screen>
       <para>If you use a caching DNS server such as <xref linkend="bind"/>
       or <ulink url="http://www.phys.uu.nl/~rombouts/pdnsd.html">Pdnsd</ulink>,
-      the script above is wrong for you. In such case, write your
+      the script above is wrong for you. In such a case, write your
       own script that tells your caching nameserver to forward queries to
       upstream DNS servers specified in the $DNS1 and $DNS2 environment
       variables.</para>
@@ -286,7 +286,7 @@
       <filename>/etc/ppp/dialup.chat</filename> file abort the script when
       it receives an indication of an error from the modem. Then the timeout
       is set to 5 seconds and the script checks that the modem responds to
-      the dummy AT command at all. If not, measures are taken to dewedge it
+      the dummy AT command. If not, measures are taken to dewedge it
       (by interrupting the data transfer and going on hook). Then the
       telephone number is dialed, and the script waits for the answer for
       75 seconds. The serial connection is considered established when the
@@ -302,8 +302,7 @@
      support EDGE. - Alexander E. Patrakov -->
 
       <para>GPRS and EDGE connections are established with the help of a
-      cellular phone connected to a computer via serial or USB cable, or
-      using Bluetooth.
+      cellular phone connected to a computer via serial, USB, or Bluetooth.
       The phone exchanges data packets with the nearest base station,
       which can be up to 35 kilometers away.
 
@@ -355,7 +354,7 @@
 # Specify your cellphone serial port and speed below
 # Note: you must manually send some vendor-specific AT commands
 # to certain old cellular phones (such as Sony-Ericsson T200)
-# in order to achieve connection speed more than 9600 bits ber second.
+# in order to achieve connection speed more than 9600 bits per second.
 <replaceable>/dev/ttyS1</replaceable>
 <replaceable>115200</replaceable>
 
@@ -421,8 +420,8 @@
 
       <para>In order to establish a PPP connection described by the
       <filename>/etc/ppp/peers/<replaceable>peername</replaceable></filename>
-      file, run, as root or as a member of the
-      <systemitem class="groupname">pppusers</systemitem> group:</para>
+      file run (as <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> or as a member 
+      of the <systemitem class="groupname">pppusers</systemitem> group):</para>
 <screen><userinput>pon <replaceable>peername</replaceable></userinput></screen>
 
       <para>In order to tear the connection down, run:</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/basicnet/mailnews/mailx.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/basicnet/mailnews/mailx.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/basicnet/mailnews/mailx.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
     <para>The <application>Heirloom mailx</application> package (formerly
     known as the <application>Nail</application> package) contains
     <command>mailx</command>, a command-line Mail User Agent derived from
-    Berkeley Mail which is intended to provide the functionality of the POSIX
+    Berkeley Mail. It is intended to provide the functionality of the POSIX
     <command>mailx</command> command with additional support for MIME messages,
     IMAP (including caching), POP3, SMTP, S/MIME, message threading/sorting,
     scoring, and filtering. <application>Heirloom mailx</application> is

Modified: trunk/BOOK/basicnet/mailnews/procmail.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/basicnet/mailnews/procmail.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/basicnet/mailnews/procmail.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@
     <sect3>
       <title>Configuration Information</title>
 
-      <para>Recipes have to be written and placed in your
+      <para>Recipes have to be written and placed in 
       <filename>~/.procmailrc</filename> for execution. The procmailex man
       page is the starting place to learn how to write recipes.
       For additional information, see also

Modified: trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/subversion.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/subversion.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/subversion.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -264,7 +264,7 @@
 
     <para><command>sed -i '...' .../Makefile.PL.in</command>: This command
     is used to fix a problem with compiling the <application>Perl</application>
-    bindings. It can be ommitted if you're not building the bindings.</para>
+    bindings. It can be omitted if you're not building the bindings.</para>
 
     <para><option>--with-neon=<replaceable><prefix></replaceable></option>:
     This option should be used if you wish to use a system-installed version

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/genutils/graphviz.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/genutils/graphviz.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/genutils/graphviz.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -502,7 +502,7 @@
           placed on a sequence of concentric circles centered about the origin,
           each a fixed radial distance from the previous circle.</para>
           <indexterm zone="graphviz twopi">
-            <primary sortas="b-twopi">twopk</primary>
+            <primary sortas="b-twopi">twopi</primary>
           </indexterm>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/graphlib/lcms.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/graphlib/lcms.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/graphlib/lcms.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
   <!ENTITY lcms-download-ftp  "&gentoo-ftp-repo;/lcms-&lcms-version;.tar.gz">
   <!ENTITY lcms-md5sum        "07bdbb4cfb05d21caa58fe3d1c84ddc1">
   <!ENTITY lcms-size          "878 KB">
-  <!ENTITY lcms-buildsize     "21 MB (includes building and installign the SWIG bindings)">
+  <!ENTITY lcms-buildsize     "21 MB (includes building and installing the SWIG bindings)">
   <!ENTITY lcms-time          "0.5 SBU (includes building and installing the SWIG bindings)">
 ]>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/prog/guile.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/prog/guile.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/prog/guile.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@
     This command is used to modify the <application>Guile</application>
     <application>SLIB</application> initialization script. There are
     incompatibilities with newer versions of <application>SLIB</application>
-    and this command modifes the script to use the installed
+    and this command modifies the script to use the installed
     <application>SLIB</application> script.</para>
 
   </sect2>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/prog/other-tools.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/prog/other-tools.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/prog/other-tools.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -615,7 +615,7 @@
       functional programming support (Scheme-like closures with lexical
       scoping, and eval-like functionality), hierarchical namespaces, a rich
       set of useful built-in types (dynamic arrays, dictionaries, symbols,
-      ...), extensibile with C (you can add functions, types, classes, methods,
+      ...), extensible with C (you can add functions, types, classes, methods,
       packages, ...), embeddable in C. <application>elastiC</application> has
       been strongly influenced by C, Smalltalk, Scheme and Python and tries to
       merge the best characteristics of all these languages, while still
@@ -1014,7 +1014,7 @@
       for simplifying use of the HTTP protocol and many other aspects of Web
       service programming. To support program development,
       <application>JWIG</application> provides a unique suite of highly
-      specialized program analyses that at compile time verify for a given
+      specialized program analysers that at compile time verify for a given
       program that no runtime errors can occur while building documents or
       receiving form input, and that all documents being shown are valid
       according to the document type definition for XHTML 1.0. The main goal of

Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/gnupg2.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/gnupg2.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/gnupg2.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -285,7 +285,7 @@
       <varlistentry id="gpgsm-gencert.sh">
         <term><command>gpgsm-gencert.sh</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>is a simple tool used to interactivly generate a certificate
+          <para>is a simple tool used to interactively generate a certificate
           request which will be printed to stdout.</para>
           <indexterm zone="gnupg2 gpgsm-gencert.sh">
             <primary sortas="b-gpgsm-gencert.sh">gpgsm-gencert.sh</primary>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/mitkrb.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/mitkrb.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/mitkrb.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -287,7 +287,7 @@
 EOF</userinput></screen>
 
         <para>You will need to substitute your domain and proper hostname
-        for the occurences of the <replaceable><belgarath></replaceable> and
+        for the occurrences of the <replaceable><belgarath></replaceable> and
         <replaceable><lfs.org></replaceable> names.</para>
 
         <para><option>default_realm</option> should be the name of your

Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/openssl.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/openssl.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/openssl.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@
 
     <para><command>cp -v -r certs /etc/ssl</command>: This installs both the
     sample certificates and documentation included with OpenSSL, and the
-    certificates that were extrated from the BLFS-ca-bundle-&ca-bundle-version;
+    certificates that were extracted from the BLFS-ca-bundle-&ca-bundle-version;
     package.</para>
 
     <para><command>for pem in /etc/ssl/certs/*.pem...</command>: This group of

Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/shadow.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/shadow.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/shadow.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@
     <title>Configuring Shadow</title>
 
     <para><application>Shadow</application>'s stock configuration for the
-    <command>useradd</command> utility may not be desireable for your
+    <command>useradd</command> utility may not be desirable for your
     installation. One default parameter causes <command>useradd</command> to
     create a mailbox file for any newly created user.
     <command>useradd</command> will make the group ownership of this file to

Modified: trunk/BOOK/pst/printing/lprng.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/pst/printing/lprng.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/pst/printing/lprng.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -244,7 +244,7 @@
       <varlistentry id="lpd">
         <term><command>lpd</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>is the print queueing daemon.</para>
+          <para>is the print queuing daemon.</para>
           <indexterm zone="LPRng lpd">
             <primary sortas="b-lpd">lpd</primary>
           </indexterm>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/server/major/openssh.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/server/major/openssh.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/server/major/openssh.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@
     <filename class="directory">/usr/bin</filename>, making sure that you 
     back up any existing copy first.</para>
 
-    <para>To run the test suite, issue the following commnds:</para>
+    <para>To run the test suite, issue the following commands:</para>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>make tests 2>&1 | tee check.log
 grep FATAL check.log</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/server/other/openldap.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/server/other/openldap.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/server/other/openldap.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -173,7 +173,7 @@
     <para><parameter>--enable-overlays</parameter>: This parameter enables
     all available overlays.</para>
 
-    <para><parameter>--disable-sql</parameter>: This parameter explicity
+    <para><parameter>--disable-sql</parameter>: This parameter explicitly
     disables the sql backend.  Omit this switch if a SQL server is
     installed.</para>
 
@@ -501,7 +501,7 @@
       <varlistentry id="slapindex">
         <term><command>slapindex</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>is used to regenerate slapd indices based upon the current
+          <para>is used to regenerate slapd indexes based upon the current
           contents of a database.</para>
           <indexterm zone="openldap slapindex">
             <primary sortas="b-slapindex">slapindex</primary>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x-setup.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x-setup.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x-setup.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@
     <filename>xorg.conf.new</filename>, in your home directory.</para>
 
     <para>Recent versions of <application>xorg-server</application> force the
-    use of the evdev input driver, and ignore legacy input devices definded in
+    use of the evdev input driver, and ignore legacy input devices defined in
     <filename>xorg.conf</filename>.  This will result in an X display that
     seems to lock up if you are using legacy input devices and do not have the
     proper input configuration files in place (added later).  Add the following

Modified: trunk/BOOK/xsoft/graphweb/firefox.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/xsoft/graphweb/firefox.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/xsoft/graphweb/firefox.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -247,7 +247,7 @@
 # compiling the OpenOffice package from source code using this copy
 # of Firefox for your Mozilla support.
 # This has NOT been tested, current versions of OpenOffice are
-# assumed not to compile agaisnt this version of xulrunner!
+# assumed not to compile against this version of xulrunner!
 #
 ###################################################################
 #ac_add_options --enable-ldap

Modified: trunk/BOOK/xsoft/graphweb/seamonkey.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/xsoft/graphweb/seamonkey.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/xsoft/graphweb/seamonkey.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@
         XPIFILE=enigmail-&seamonkey-enigmail-version;.xpi xpi</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>This package does not come with a test suite. However, it
-    can be launched fom the build directory before installing with the
+    can be launched from the build directory before installing with the
     command line:
     <userinput>../seamonkey-build/dist/bin/seamonkey</userinput>.</para>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/abiword.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/abiword.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/abiword.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@
 
       <para>If you have <xref linkend="desktop-file-utils"/> installed,
       you should run the <command>update-desktop-database</command> command
-      to update the mimeminfo cache and allow the Help system to work.</para>
+      to update the mimeinfo cache and allow the Help system to work.</para>
 
     </sect3>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/evolution.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/evolution.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/evolution.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@
     binary.</para>
 
     <para><option>--with-kde-applnk-path=<replaceable><$KDE_PREFIX/share/applnk></replaceable></option>:
-    Use this parameter if you wnat the installation process to create a
+    Use this parameter if you want the installation process to create a
     <filename class="extension">.desktop</filename> file in the KDE global
     desktop file directory.</para>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/xsoft/other/thunderbird.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/xsoft/other/thunderbird.xml	2009-07-06 18:50:50 UTC (rev 7830)
+++ trunk/BOOK/xsoft/other/thunderbird.xml	2009-07-06 19:12:40 UTC (rev 7831)
@@ -366,7 +366,7 @@
     <application>Enigmail</application>.</para>
 
     <para><command>install .../{movemail,rss}.rdf</command>: These commands
-    are used to install two mail extensions inadvertantly left out of the
+    are used to install two mail extensions inadvertently left out of the
     installation script or installed to the wrong location.</para>
 
   </sect2>




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