r7369 - trunk/BOOK/xsoft/suites

randy at linuxfromscratch.org randy at linuxfromscratch.org
Wed Apr 9 05:58:30 PDT 2008

Author: randy
Date: 2008-04-09 06:58:30 -0600 (Wed, 09 Apr 2008)
New Revision: 7369

Misc typo fixes and minor rewording in the OpenOffice instructions

Modified: trunk/BOOK/xsoft/suites/openoffice.xml
--- trunk/BOOK/xsoft/suites/openoffice.xml	2008-04-09 04:25:25 UTC (rev 7368)
+++ trunk/BOOK/xsoft/suites/openoffice.xml	2008-04-09 12:58:30 UTC (rev 7369)
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@
 for appl in sbase scalc sdraw simpress smath soffice spadmin swriter
-    ln -v -sf /opt/openoffice-&openoffice-version;/program/$appl /usr/bin/$appl
+    ln -v -sf /opt/openoffice-&openoffice-version;/program/$appl /usr/bin
 done &&
 pushd sysui/desktop/icons &&
@@ -267,8 +267,8 @@
     <para>If you have installed <xref linkend="desktop-file-utils"/>, you
-    should copy the <filename>*.desktop</filename> files to
-    <filename>/usr/share/applications</filename> with the following
+    should copy the <filename class='extension'>*.desktop</filename> files to
+    <filename>/usr/share/applications</filename> using the following
     commands as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
 <screen role="root"><userinput>install -v -d -m755 /usr/share/applications &&
@@ -300,9 +300,9 @@
     <title>Command Explanations</title>
     <para><command>sed 's at ..\$dist\$/configure at uudecode="no"...'</command>: 
-    This command corrects a build failure when a faulty
-    <command>uudecode</command>, provided by <xref linkend="gmime"/>, is 
-    installed.</para>
+    This command corrects a build failure if a faulty
+    <command>uudecode</command> program provided by the <xref linkend="gmime"/>
+    package is installed.</para>
     <para><parameter>--enable-*</parameter>: The switches listed in the
     example <command>configure</command> command above force the use of system
@@ -350,7 +350,8 @@
     <para><parameter>--disable-odk</parameter>: This switch disables the build
     of the <application>OpenOffice</application> SDK.  Omit this switch if
-    you've downloaded the SDK package above.</para>
+    you've downloaded the SDK package (and additional requirements)
+    above.</para>
     <para><parameter>--disable-qadevooo</parameter>: This switch skips
     the building of the quality assurance tools used by the
@@ -363,7 +364,7 @@
     engine in place of the full <application>Mozilla</application> suite.
     This will disable the use of a <application>Thunderbird</application>
     address book as a data source.  If you omit the type of installation,
-    configure defaults to, and searches for a working
+    <command>configure</command> defaults to and searches for a working
     <application>XULRunner</application> installation and will fail if
     one is not found.</para>
@@ -384,7 +385,7 @@
     <para><parameter>--with-use-shell=bash</parameter>: Tells the 
     <application>OpenOffice</application> build system to use
-    <command>bash</command> as opposed to <command>tcsh</command>.</para>
+    <command>bash</command> instead of <command>tcsh</command>.</para>
     <para><command>./bootstrap</command>: Build the
     <command>dmake</command> utility required to complete the
@@ -393,7 +394,7 @@
     <para><command>dmake</command>: Compiles the package.</para>
     <para><command>for appl in sbase scalc...</command>: Creates symlinks
-    for the applicatons in
+    for the applications in
     <filename class="directory">/usr/bin</filename>.</para>
     <para><command>for appl in *.desktop...</command>: Edit the

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