r7338 - in trunk/BOOK: basicnet/connect general/genlib general/sysutils multimedia/libdriv server/other x/installing

thomas at linuxfromscratch.org thomas at linuxfromscratch.org
Tue Apr 1 13:41:23 PDT 2008


Author: thomas
Date: 2008-04-01 14:41:23 -0600 (Tue, 01 Apr 2008)
New Revision: 7338

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/basicnet/connect/ppp.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libusb.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/hal.xml
   trunk/BOOK/multimedia/libdriv/alsa-utils.xml
   trunk/BOOK/server/other/svnserver.xml
   trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x-setup.xml
Log:
Spelling and style fixes

Modified: trunk/BOOK/basicnet/connect/ppp.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/basicnet/connect/ppp.xml	2008-04-01 18:37:20 UTC (rev 7337)
+++ trunk/BOOK/basicnet/connect/ppp.xml	2008-04-01 20:41:23 UTC (rev 7338)
@@ -168,6 +168,7 @@
 
       <para>Add the users who may run <application>PPP</application> to the
       <systemitem class="groupname">pppusers</systemitem> group:</para>
+
 <screen role="root"><userinput>usermod -a -G pppusers <replaceable><username></replaceable></userinput></screen>
 
     <sect4>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libusb.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libusb.xml	2008-04-01 18:37:20 UTC (rev 7337)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libusb.xml	2008-04-01 20:41:23 UTC (rev 7338)
@@ -177,6 +177,7 @@
 
     <para>Add any users that need to access raw USB devices to the 
     <systemitem class="groupname">usb</systemitem> group.</para>
+
 <screen role="root"><userinput>usermod -a -G usb <replaceable><username></replaceable></userinput></screen>
 
   </sect2>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/hal.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/hal.xml	2008-04-01 18:37:20 UTC (rev 7337)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/hal.xml	2008-04-01 20:41:23 UTC (rev 7338)
@@ -277,7 +277,9 @@
       <para>Now add the users you would like to the <systemitem
       class="groupname">halusers</systemitem> group to use
       <application>HAL</application>.</para>
+
 <screen role="root"><userinput>usermod -a -G halusers <replaceable><username></replaceable></userinput></screen>
+
       <para>Note that these users still need
       to have appropriate permissions to access the devices that
       <application>HAL</application> will invoke its methods on.</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/multimedia/libdriv/alsa-utils.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/multimedia/libdriv/alsa-utils.xml	2008-04-01 18:37:20 UTC (rev 7337)
+++ trunk/BOOK/multimedia/libdriv/alsa-utils.xml	2008-04-01 20:41:23 UTC (rev 7338)
@@ -167,16 +167,17 @@
 EOF
 chmod -v 644 /etc/udev/rules.d/40-alsa.rules</userinput></screen>
 
-      <para>All sound devices are not accessable for any user except 
+      <para>All sound devices are not accessible for any user except 
       <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> and members of the
       <systemitem class="groupname">audio</systemitem> group. Add any users
       that might use the sound devices to that group:</para>
+
 <screen role="root"><userinput>usermod -a -G audio <replaceable><username></replaceable></userinput></screen>
 
       <note>
         <para>You may need to log out and back in again to refresh your group
         memberships. '<command>su <replaceable><username></replaceable></command>'
-        should work around this as well.</para>
+        should work as well.</para>
       </note>
 
     </sect3>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/server/other/svnserver.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/server/other/svnserver.xml	2008-04-01 18:37:20 UTC (rev 7337)
+++ trunk/BOOK/server/other/svnserver.xml	2008-04-01 20:41:23 UTC (rev 7338)
@@ -188,7 +188,7 @@
       <note>
         <para>You may need to log out and back in again to refresh your group
         memberships. '<command>su <replaceable><username></replaceable></command>'
-        should work around this as well.</para>
+        should work as well.</para>
       </note>
 
     </sect3>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x-setup.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x-setup.xml	2008-04-01 18:37:20 UTC (rev 7337)
+++ trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x-setup.xml	2008-04-01 20:41:23 UTC (rev 7338)
@@ -274,10 +274,11 @@
     Mode  0660
 EndSection</literal></screen>
 
-    <para>The DRI devices are not accessable for any user except 
+    <para>The DRI devices are not accessible for any user except 
       <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> and members of the
       <systemitem class="groupname">video</systemitem> group. Add any users
       that might use X to that group:</para>
+
 <screen role="root"><userinput>usermod -a -G video <replaceable><username></replaceable></userinput></screen>
 
     <note><para>DRI configuration may differ if you are using alternate




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