r7114 - in trunk/BOOK: book general/genlib general/sysutils gnome/add introduction/important introduction/welcome kde/add kde/core postlfs/config postlfs/editors postlfs/shells x/installing xsoft/office

randy at linuxfromscratch.org randy at linuxfromscratch.org
Tue Oct 16 04:56:37 PDT 2007


Author: randy
Date: 2007-10-16 05:56:37 -0600 (Tue, 16 Oct 2007)
New Revision: 7114

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/book/organization.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libgsf.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/pciutils.xml
   trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-audio.xml
   trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-media.xml
   trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/libgnomeprint.xml
   trunk/BOOK/introduction/important/beyond.xml
   trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/acknowledgments.xml
   trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml
   trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/credits.xml
   trunk/BOOK/kde/add/kdeutils.xml
   trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdebase.xml
   trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdelibs.xml
   trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml
   trunk/BOOK/postlfs/editors/vim.xml
   trunk/BOOK/postlfs/shells/zsh.xml
   trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x-config.xml
   trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x7server.xml
   trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/gnucash.xml
Log:
Fixed numerous typos, ommisions and corrections by applying patches provided by Chris Staub - Thanks, Chris

Modified: trunk/BOOK/book/organization.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/book/organization.xml	2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/book/organization.xml	2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -66,8 +66,7 @@
 
   <para><application>GNOME</application> is the main alternative to
   <application>KDE</application> in the Desktop Environment arena and
-  we cover both <application>GNOME</application>-1.4
-  and <application>GNOME</application>-&gnome-version; here.</para>
+  we cover <application>GNOME</application>-&gnome-version; here.</para>
 
   <bridgehead renderas="sect2">Part X - X Software</bridgehead>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libgsf.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libgsf.xml	2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libgsf.xml	2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
       <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
 
       <seglistitem>
-        <seg>gsf-office-thumbnailer (optional)</seg>
+        <seg>gsf, gsf-office-thumbnailer (optional), and gsf-vba-dump</seg>
         <seg>libgsf-1.{so,a} and optionally, libgsf-gnome-1.{so,a}</seg>
         <seg>/usr/include/libgsf-1 and /usr/share/gtk-doc/html/gsf</seg>
       </seglistitem>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/pciutils.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/pciutils.xml	2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/pciutils.xml	2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -91,9 +91,10 @@
     <para><command>sed -i 's/null ;/null 2>\&1 ;/'
     update-pciids.sh</command>: This command suppresses some unneeded screen
     output from the <command>update-pciids</command> command if you don't have
-    either <application>Lynx</application> or <application>Wget</application>
-    installed by redirecting the stderr output of the embedded
-    <command>which</command> command to <filename>/dev/null</filename>.</para>
+    either <application>Lynx</application>, <application>Wget</application>,
+    or <application>Curl</application> installed by redirecting the stderr
+    output of the embedded <command>which</command> command to
+    <filename>/dev/null</filename>.</para>
 
   </sect2>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-audio.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-audio.xml	2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-audio.xml	2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
     <para>The <application>gnome-audio</application> package contains a set
     of default sounds for the <application>GNOME</application> GUI desktop.
     Sound files for startup, shutdown and many GTK+ events are included.
-    These sounds compliment the <application>GNOME Media</application>
+    These sounds complement the <application>GNOME Media</application>
     package.</para>
 
     <bridgehead renderas="sect3">Package Information</bridgehead>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-media.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-media.xml	2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-media.xml	2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -57,8 +57,7 @@
     <bridgehead renderas="sect3">GNOME Media Dependencies</bridgehead>
 
     <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Required</bridgehead>
-    <para role="required"><xref linkend="perl-xml-parser"/>,
-    <xref linkend="scrollkeeper"/>,
+    <para role="required"><xref linkend="scrollkeeper"/>,
     <xref linkend="esound"/>, and
     <xref linkend="libgnomeui"/></para>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/libgnomeprint.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/libgnomeprint.xml	2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/libgnomeprint.xml	2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -58,7 +58,6 @@
     <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Required</bridgehead>
     <para role="required"><xref linkend="pango"/>,
     <xref linkend="libart_lgpl"/>,
-    <xref linkend="fontconfig"/>,
     <xref linkend="popt"/>,
     <xref linkend="libxml2"/>, and
     <xref linkend="perl-xml-parser"/></para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/important/beyond.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/important/beyond.xml	2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/important/beyond.xml	2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
     <listitem>
       <para>If you are having a problem compiling the package, try
       searching the LFS archives at
-      <ulink url="http://search.&lfs-domainname;/"/> for the error or if
+      <ulink url="http://www.&lfs-domainname;/search.html"/> for the error or if
       that fails, try searching Google. If everything else fails,
       try the blfs-support mailing-list.</para>
     </listitem>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/acknowledgments.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/acknowledgments.xml	2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/acknowledgments.xml	2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
       <para><ulink url="mailto:highos@&lfs-domainname;">Jesse
-      Tie-Ten-Quee</ulink> <higho <at> @&lfs-domainname;> for
+      Tie-Ten-Quee</ulink> <higho <at> &lfs-domainname;> for
       answering many questions on IRC, having a great deal of patience and for
       not killing the former editor for the joke in the original BLFS
       announcement!</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml	2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml	2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -45,7 +45,11 @@
       <para>October 16th, 2007</para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
-          <para>[name] - Updated the Evince instructions to reflect the
+          <para>[randy] - Fixed numerous typos, ommisions and corrections
+          by applying patches provided by Chris Staub. Thanks, Chris.</para>
+        </listitem>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[randy] - Updated the Evince instructions to reflect the
           GNOME-2.18.3 update.</para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/credits.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/credits.xml	2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/credits.xml	2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -140,12 +140,12 @@
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>Chapters 28 and 29: KDE:
+        <para>Chapters 28, 29, and 30: KDE:
         <emphasis>Bruce Dubbs</emphasis>.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>Chapters 30, 31, and 32: GNOME:
+        <para>Chapters 31 and 32: GNOME:
         <emphasis>Larry Lawrence</emphasis>.</para>
       </listitem>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/kde/add/kdeutils.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/kde/add/kdeutils.xml	2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/kde/add/kdeutils.xml	2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -102,9 +102,9 @@
       <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
 
       <seglistitem>
-        <seg>ark, irkick, kcalc, kcharselect, kdf, kedit, kfloppy,
-        kgpg, khexedit, kjots, kregexpeditor, ktimer, kwalletmanager,
-        and superkaramba</seg>
+        <seg>ark, irkick, kcalc, kcharselect, kdessh, kdf, kedit, kfloppy,
+        kgpg, khexedit, kjots, klaptop_acpi_helper, klaptop_check,
+        kregexpeditor, ktimer, kwalletmanager, kwikdisk, and superkaramba</seg>
         <seg>Several kdeutils specific libraries</seg>
         <seg>Several subdirectories in $KDE_PREFIX/share</seg>
       </seglistitem>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdebase.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdebase.xml	2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdebase.xml	2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -169,13 +169,13 @@
       <seglistitem>
         <seg>appletproxy, drkonqi, extensionproxy, genkdmconf, kaccess,
         kappfinder, kapplymousetheme, kasbar, kate, kblankscrn.kss,
-        kbookmarkmerger, kcheckpass, kcheckrunning, kcminit, kcontrol,
-        kcontroledit, kdcop, kdebugdialog, kdeeject, kdeinstallktheme,
+        kbookmarkmerger, kcheckpass, kcheckrunning, kcminit, kcminit_startup,
+        kcontrol, kcontroledit, kdcop, kdebugdialog, kdeeject, kdeinstallktheme,
         kdepasswd, kdeprintfax, kdesktop, kdesktop_lock, kdesu, kdesud, kdialog,
         kdm, kdm_config, kdm_greet, kdmctl, keditbookmarks, keditfiletype,
         kfind, kfmclient, kfontinst, kfontview, khc_docbookdig.pl, khc_htdig.pl,
         khc_htsearch.pl, khc_indexbuilder, khc_mansearch.pl, khelpcenter,
-        khotkeys, kicker, kinfocenter, kio_media_mounthelper,
+        khotkeys, kicker, kinfocenter (link to kcontrol), kio_media_mounthelper,
         kio_system_documenthelper, kjobviewer, klipper,
         klocaldomainurifilterhelper, kmenuedit, knetattach, kompmgr, konqueror,
         konsole, kpager, kpersonalizer, kpm, kprinter, krandom.kss, krandrtray,

Modified: trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdelibs.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdelibs.xml	2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdelibs.xml	2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@
         ksendbugmail, kshell, kstartupconfig, ksvgtopng, ktelnetservice,
         ktradertest, kunittestmodrunner, kwrapper, lnusertemp,
         make_driver_db_cups, make_driver_db_lpr, makekdewidgets, meinproc,
-        and preparetips</seg>
+        preparetips, and start_kdeinit</seg>
         <seg>Numerous <application>KDE</application> libraries and helper
         modules</seg>
         <seg>/etc/kde and the following subdirectories of &kde-dir;/:

Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml	2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml	2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
     <para>This section is really about creating a <emphasis>rescue</emphasis>
     device.  As the name <emphasis>rescue</emphasis> implies, the host
     system has a problem, often lost partition information or corrupted file
-    systems, that prevent it from booting and/or operating normally.  For
+    systems, that prevents it from booting and/or operating normally.  For
     this reason, you <emphasis>must not</emphasis> depend on resources from
     the host being "rescued".  To presume that any given partition or hard
     drive <emphasis>will</emphasis> be available is a risky presumption.</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/editors/vim.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/editors/vim.xml	2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/editors/vim.xml	2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@
       <title>Configuration Information</title>
 
       <para><application>Vim-7.0</application> introduced an
-      integrated spell checker that doesn't requires additional libraries to be
+      integrated spell checker that doesn't require additional libraries to be
       installed.  To enable the spell checker you can set the following in
       one of the configuration files: </para>
 
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@
       from: <ulink url="ftp://ftp.vim.org/pub/vim/runtime/spell/"/> and save
       them to <filename class="directory"> ~/.vim/spell </filename> or in
       <filename class="directory">
-      /usr/share/vim/vim70/spell/</filename>.</para>
+      /usr/share/vim/vim71/spell/</filename>.</para>
 
       <para>For more information about the spell checker and some other
       features in  <application>Vim-&vim-version;</application> (such us
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@
     <para>A list of the reinstalled files, along with their short
     descriptions can be found in the <ulink
     url="&lfs-root;/chapter06/vim.html#contents-vim">LFS Vim Installation
-    Instrutions</ulink></para>
+    Instructions</ulink></para>
 
     <segmentedlist>
       <segtitle>Installed Programs</segtitle>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/shells/zsh.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/shells/zsh.xml	2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/shells/zsh.xml	2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -93,11 +93,11 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of ZSH</title>
 
-    <para>If you downloaded the optional documentation, unpack it the same
-    way you would the source tarball. The documentation will unpack into
-    the <filename class='directory'>Doc</filename> directory of the source
-    tree.</para>
+    <para>If you downloaded the optional documentation, unpack it with
+    the following command:</para>
 
+<screen><userinput>tar --strip-components=1 -xvf ../zsh-&zsh-version;-doc.tar.bz2</userinput></screen>
+
     <para>Install <application>ZSH</application> by running the following
     commands:</para>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x-config.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x-config.xml	2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x-config.xml	2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@
       these properly, you will notice a resolution much lower than desired.
       The default <option>HorizSync</option> setting is 28-33kHz which is very
       conservative.  The default  <option>VertRefresh</option> is 43-72Hz.
-      Consult your monitor documentation or search on line for the proper
+      Consult your monitor documentation or search online for the proper
       settings for your monitor.</para>
 
       <para>It is also possible to control many detailed timing characteristics
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@
       or via a graphical interface such as <application>KDE</application>'s
       Control Center.</para>
 
-      <para>A typical monitor sections will normally look like:</para>
+      <para>A typical monitor section will normally look like:</para>
 
 <screen><literal>Section "Monitor"
     DisplaySize   400   300 # mm

Modified: trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x7server.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x7server.xml	2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x7server.xml	2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
     </note>
 
     <para>A <ulink url='http://wiki.x.org/wiki/Development/Security'>security
-    vulnerability</ulink> have been identified in the xorg-server
+    vulnerability</ulink> has been identified in the xorg-server
     package. Apply a patch to fix this vulnerability with the following
     command:</para>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/gnucash.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/gnucash.xml	2007-10-16 11:29:13 UTC (rev 7113)
+++ trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/gnucash.xml	2007-10-16 11:56:37 UTC (rev 7114)
@@ -76,7 +76,6 @@
     <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Required</bridgehead>
     <para role="required"><xref linkend="guile"/>,
     <xref linkend="slib"/>,
-    <xref linkend="libgnomeui"/>,
     <xref linkend="goffice"/>, and
     <xref linkend="gtkhtml"/></para>
 




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