r6035 - in trunk/BOOK: multimedia/libdriv x/installing

DJ Lucas blfs-dev at lfs.lucasit.com
Tue May 9 16:19:26 PDT 2006


randy at linuxfromscratch.org wrote:
> Author: randy
> Date: 2006-05-09 16:59:59 -0600 (Tue, 09 May 2006)
> New Revision: 6035
> 
> Modified:

< A lot of files >

> Log:
> Typo, spelling and tag fixes in various package instructions

Wow!  Thanks for that randy, looks good!  I wish I had that kind of 
patience.  Anyway, out of all of those changes, I have only one to question:

> Modified: trunk/BOOK/x/installing/xorg.xml
> ===================================================================
> --- trunk/BOOK/x/installing/xorg.xml	2006-05-09 21:12:38 UTC (rev 6034)
> +++ trunk/BOOK/x/installing/xorg.xml	2006-05-09 22:59:59 UTC (rev 6035)
> @@ -4,18 +4,6 @@
>    <!ENTITY % general-entities SYSTEM "../../general.ent">
>    %general-entities;
>  
> -    <!-- Inserted as a reminder to do this. The mention of a test suite
> -         is usually right before the root user installation commands. Please
> -         delete these 12 (including one blank) lines after you are done.-->
> -
> -    <!-- Use one of the two mentions below about a test suite,
> -         delete the line that is not applicable. Of course, if the
> -         test suite uses syntax other than "make check", revise the
> -         line to reflect the actual syntax to run the test suite -->
> -
> -    <!-- <para>This package does not come with a test suite.</para> -->
> -    <!-- <para>To test the results, issue: <command>make check</command>.</para> -->
> -
>    <!ENTITY xorg-download-http "http://xorg.freedesktop.org/releases/X11R&xorg-version;/src-single/X11R&xorg-version;-src.tar.bz2 ">
>    <!ENTITY xorg-download-ftp  "ftp://expo.x.org/pub/X11R&xorg-version;/src-single/X11R&xorg-version;-src.tar.bz2">
>    <!ENTITY xorg-md5sum        "52ad69832db5c36c7041f90625ed4598">
> @@ -122,7 +110,7 @@
>      <bridgehead renderas="sect3">Download Instructions</bridgehead>
>  
>      <para>As an alternative to downloading the entire source tree in a single
> -    file, there are several, smaller files that can be fetched from the
> +    file, there are several smaller files that can be fetched from the
>      download location (directory /pub/X11R&xorg-version;/src/):</para>
>  
>      <itemizedlist spacing='compact'>

As I read that, "several" and "smaller" are both adjectives.  The comma 
seems to be correct in the original.

-- DJ Lucas



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