r4863 - trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs

randy at linuxfromscratch.org randy at linuxfromscratch.org
Sun Jul 31 15:00:38 PDT 2005


Author: randy
Date: 2005-07-31 16:00:36 -0600 (Sun, 31 Jul 2005)
New Revision: 4863

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/cvs.xml
   trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/inetutils.xml
   trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/ncftp.xml
   trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/ncpfs.xml
   trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/ntp.xml
Log:
Fixed typos and minor wording changes to various Chapter 18 package instructions

Modified: trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/cvs.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/cvs.xml	2005-07-31 21:05:02 UTC (rev 4862)
+++ trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/cvs.xml	2005-07-31 22:00:36 UTC (rev 4863)
@@ -82,14 +82,15 @@
     <title>Installation of CVS</title>
 
     <para>By default <application>CVS</application>
-    is statically linked against the zlib library included in its source
-    tree. This makes it exposed to possible security vulnerabilities in that
-    library. If you want to modify CVS to use the newest system shared zlib
-    library apply the following patch:</para>
+    is statically linked against the <application>Zlib</application> library
+    included in its source tree. This makes it exposed to possible security
+    vulnerabilities in that library. If you want to modify
+    <application>CVS</application> to use the newest system shared
+    <application>Zlib</application> library, apply the following patch:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../cvs-&cvs-version;-zlib-1.patch</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Install <application>cvs</application> by running
+    <para>Install <application>CVS</application> by running
     the following commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr &&
@@ -133,10 +134,11 @@
 
       <para><filename>~/.cvsrc</filename> is the main
       <application>CVS</application> configuration file.
-      This file is used by users to specify defaults for different <command>cvs
-      </command> commands, for example to make all <command>cvs diff</command>
-      commands run with <userinput>-u</userinput>, a user would add <userinput>
-      diff -u</userinput> to their <filename>.cvsrc</filename> file.</para>
+      This file is used by users to specify defaults for different
+      <command>cvs</command> commands. For example, to make all
+      <command>cvs diff</command> commands run with <option>-u</option>, a user
+      would add <option>diff -u</option> to their <filename>.cvsrc</filename>
+      file.</para>
 
       <para><filename>~/.cvswrappers</filename> specifies wrappers to be used in
       addition to those specified in the <filename>CVSROOT/cvswrappers</filename>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/inetutils.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/inetutils.xml	2005-07-31 21:05:02 UTC (rev 4862)
+++ trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/inetutils.xml	2005-07-31 22:00:36 UTC (rev 4863)
@@ -90,6 +90,8 @@
     --disable-logger --disable-syslogd &&
 make</userinput></screen>
 
+    <para>This package does not come with a test suite.</para>
+
     <para>Now, as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>make install &&
@@ -102,11 +104,11 @@
 
     <para><parameter>--disable-logger</parameter>: This switch prevents
     <application>Inetutils</application> installing a <command>logger</command>
-    program, which is installed in the LFS Book.</para>
+    program, which is installed in the LFS book.</para>
 
     <para><parameter>--disable-syslogd</parameter>: This switch prevents
-    <application>Inetutils</application> installing a System Log Daemon, which is
-    installed in the LFS Book.</para>
+    <application>Inetutils</application> installing a system log daemon, which is
+    installed in the LFS book.</para>
 
     <para><option>--with-wrap</option>: This switch makes
     <application>Inetutils</application> compile against
@@ -263,4 +265,3 @@
   </sect2>
 
 </sect1>
-

Modified: trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/ncftp.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/ncftp.xml	2005-07-31 21:05:02 UTC (rev 4862)
+++ trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/ncftp.xml	2005-07-31 22:00:36 UTC (rev 4863)
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@
       <varlistentry id="ncftp-prog">
         <term><command>ncftp</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>a browser program for File Transfer Protocol.</para>
+          <para>is a browser program for File Transfer Protocol.</para>
           <indexterm zone="ncftp ncftp-prog">
             <primary sortas="b-ncftp">ncftp</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@
       <varlistentry id="ncftpbatch">
         <term><command>ncftpbatch</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>individual batch FTP job processor.</para>
+          <para>is an individual batch FTP job processor.</para>
           <indexterm zone="ncftp ncftpbatch">
             <primary sortas="b-ncftpbatch">ncftpbatch</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@
       <varlistentry id="ncftpbookmarks">
         <term><command>ncftpbookmarks</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para><application>NcFTP</application> Bookmark Editor
+          <para>is the <application>NcFTP</application> Bookmark Editor
           (<application>NCurses</application>-based).</para>
           <indexterm zone="ncftp ncftpbookmarks">
             <primary sortas="b-ncftpbookmarks">ncftpbookmarks</primary>
@@ -205,7 +205,8 @@
       <varlistentry id="ncftpget">
         <term><command>ncftpget</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>internet file transfer program for scripts.</para>
+          <para>is an internet file transfer program for scripts used to
+          retrieve files.</para>
           <indexterm zone="ncftp ncftpget">
             <primary sortas="b-ncftpget">ncftpget</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -215,7 +216,8 @@
       <varlistentry id="ncftpls">
         <term><command>ncftpls</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>internet file transfer program for scripts.</para>
+          <para>is an internet file transfer program for scripts used to
+          list files.</para>
           <indexterm zone="ncftp ncftpls">
             <primary sortas="b-ncftpls">ncftpls</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -225,7 +227,8 @@
       <varlistentry id="ncftpput">
         <term><command>ncftpput</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>internet file transfer program for scripts.</para>
+          <para>is an internet file transfer program for scripts used to
+          transfer files.</para>
           <indexterm zone="ncftp ncftpput">
             <primary sortas="b-ncftpput">ncftpput</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -235,7 +238,7 @@
       <varlistentry id="ncftpspooler">
         <term><command>ncftpspooler</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>global batch FTP job processor daemon.</para>
+          <para>is a global batch FTP job processor daemon.</para>
           <indexterm zone="ncftp ncftpspooler">
             <primary sortas="b-ncftpspooler">ncftpspooler</primary>
           </indexterm>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/ncpfs.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/ncpfs.xml	2005-07-31 21:05:02 UTC (rev 4862)
+++ trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/ncpfs.xml	2005-07-31 22:00:36 UTC (rev 4863)
@@ -80,20 +80,21 @@
     <title>Command Explanations</title>
 
     <para><parameter>--prefix=""</parameter>:
-    installs binaries on the root partition so that they are available at
+    Installs binaries on the root partition so that they are available at
     boot time.  This may not be ideal for all systems.  If
     <filename class="directory">/usr</filename> is mounted locally,
     <parameter>--prefix=/usr</parameter> may be a better option.</para>
 
-    <para><parameter>--includedir=/usr/include</parameter>: Tells configure
-    to look in <filename class="directory">/usr/include</filename> for header
-    files. It also tells make to install <application>NCPFS</application>'s
-    headers here.</para>
+    <para><parameter>--includedir=/usr/include</parameter>: Tells
+    <command>configure</command> to look in
+    <filename class="directory">/usr/include</filename> for header
+    files. It also tells <command>make</command> to install
+    <application>NCPFS</application>'s headers here.</para>
 
-    <para><parameter>--mandir=/usr/share/man</parameter>:  installs the man
+    <para><parameter>--mandir=/usr/share/man</parameter>: Installs the man
     pages in the correct location.</para>
 
-    <para><parameter>--datadir=/usr/share</parameter>:  correctly installs the
+    <para><parameter>--datadir=/usr/share</parameter>: Correctly installs the
     locale files to <filename class="directory">/usr/share</filename>.</para>
 
     <note>
@@ -149,7 +150,7 @@
       password is needed, for instance when using a guest account, a single '-'
       should be put in place of a password.</para>
 
-      <para>It should be noted that the <command>ncpmount</command>
+      <para>It should be noted that <command>ncpmount</command>
       is not intended to mount individual volumes because each mount point
       creates a separate client connection to the Novell server.  Mounting
       each individual volume separately would be unwise, as mounting all
@@ -194,7 +195,7 @@
       <segtitle>Client Utilities</segtitle>
       <segtitle>Server Admin Utilities</segtitle>
       <segtitle>IPX Interface Utilities</segtitle>
-      <segtitle>Other Utilitie</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Other Utilities</segtitle>
       <segtitle>Installed Libraries</segtitle>
       <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
 
@@ -217,4 +218,3 @@
   </sect2>
 
 </sect1>
-

Modified: trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/ntp.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/ntp.xml	2005-07-31 21:05:02 UTC (rev 4862)
+++ trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/ntp.xml	2005-07-31 22:00:36 UTC (rev 4863)
@@ -77,12 +77,8 @@
 
     <para>Now, as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
 
-<screen role="root"><userinput>make install</userinput></screen>
-
-    <para>Additionally, install the documentation by executing the following
-	as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
-
-<screen role="root"><userinput>install -v -m755 -d /usr/share/doc/ntp-&ntp-version; &&
+<screen role="root"><userinput>make install &&
+install -v -m755 -d /usr/share/doc/ntp-&ntp-version; &&
 cp -v -R html /usr/share/doc/ntp-&ntp-version;/</userinput></screen>
 
   </sect2>
@@ -157,8 +153,7 @@
 <screen><literal>ntpd -q</literal></screen>
 
       <para>Execute the following command if you would like to set the
-      hardware clock at shutdown and reboot based on the current system
-      time:</para>
+      hardware clock to the current system time at shutdown and reboot:</para>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>ln -v -sf ../init.d/setclock /etc/rc.d/rc0.d/K46setclock &&
 ln -v -sf ../init.d/setclock /etc/rc.d/rc6.d/K46setclock</userinput></screen>




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