r4858 - in trunk/BOOK: . introduction/welcome multimedia/libdriv

DJ Lucas dj at linuxfromscratch.org
Sun Jul 31 13:31:22 PDT 2005


Randy McMurchy wrote:
> dj at linuxfromscratch.org wrote these words on 07/31/05 12:19 CST:
> 
> 
> 
>>       <para>Probably the easiest way to store mixer levels is to set and
>>-      retrieve them using a bootscript.</para>
>>+      retrieve them using at boot and shutdown.  We'll use a bootscript to
>>+      store the values at shutdown.</para>
> 
> 
> This needs to be fixed. Mostly the grammatical error in the first
> sentence and it would be nice if the "We" could be changed to "A
> bootscript is used to store..." for the occurence of the "We".
> 
> 
> 
>>+      <para>We will restore the volume using the stored settings and a 
>>+      dev.d handler script that will execute when the device is detected 
>>+      durring boot (when pluged in for USB devices).  While still the 
>>+      <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user, create the dev.d
>>+      handler script with the following commands:</para>
> 
> 
> Please s/durring/during/ and s/pluged/plugged/
> 
> Perhaps something besides the "We" opening the first sentence as well.
> 
> :-)
> 


You know 'We' never even entered my train of thought last night.  I got
tired and crashed while waiting for a test render...then commited this
morning.  Thanks for the catch.  Something better will be in place as
soon as postfix changes are confirmed.

-- DJ Lucas



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