r4858 - in trunk/BOOK: . introduction/welcome multimedia/libdriv

Randy McMurchy LFS-User at mcmurchy.com
Sun Jul 31 10:34:42 PDT 2005


dj at linuxfromscratch.org wrote these words on 07/31/05 12:19 CST:


>        <para>Probably the easiest way to store mixer levels is to set and
> -      retrieve them using a bootscript.</para>
> +      retrieve them using at boot and shutdown.  We'll use a bootscript to
> +      store the values at shutdown.</para>

This needs to be fixed. Mostly the grammatical error in the first
sentence and it would be nice if the "We" could be changed to "A
bootscript is used to store..." for the occurence of the "We".


> +      <para>We will restore the volume using the stored settings and a 
> +      dev.d handler script that will execute when the device is detected 
> +      durring boot (when pluged in for USB devices).  While still the 
> +      <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user, create the dev.d
> +      handler script with the following commands:</para>

Please s/durring/during/ and s/pluged/plugged/

Perhaps something besides the "We" opening the first sentence as well.

:-)

-- 
Randy

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