r4807 - in trunk/BOOK/connect: . dhcp dialup other

randy at linuxfromscratch.org randy at linuxfromscratch.org
Wed Jul 27 14:24:54 PDT 2005


Author: randy
Date: 2005-07-27 15:24:52 -0600 (Wed, 27 Jul 2005)
New Revision: 4807

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/connect/connect.xml
   trunk/BOOK/connect/dhcp/dhcpcd.xml
   trunk/BOOK/connect/dialup/wvdial.xml
   trunk/BOOK/connect/other/other.xml
   trunk/BOOK/connect/other/pppoe.xml
Log:
Typo fixes and minor rewording to package and introductory text in Section IV

Modified: trunk/BOOK/connect/connect.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/connect/connect.xml	2005-07-27 20:49:55 UTC (rev 4806)
+++ trunk/BOOK/connect/connect.xml	2005-07-27 21:24:52 UTC (rev 4807)
@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@
   <partintro>
     <para>The LFS book covers setting up networking by connecting to a LAN
     with a static IP address. There are other methods used to connect to
-    a LAN and other networks (such as the Internet).  We cover
-    the most popular methods in this chapter.</para>
+    a LAN and other networks (such as the Internet). The most popular methods
+    are covered in this chapter.</para>
   </partintro>
 
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="dialup/dialup.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/connect/dhcp/dhcpcd.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/connect/dhcp/dhcpcd.xml	2005-07-27 20:49:55 UTC (rev 4806)
+++ trunk/BOOK/connect/dhcp/dhcpcd.xml	2005-07-27 21:24:52 UTC (rev 4807)
@@ -209,7 +209,7 @@
     <segmentedlist>
       <segtitle>Installed Program</segtitle>
       <segtitle>Installed Libraries</segtitle>
-      <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Directory</segtitle>
 
       <seglistitem>
         <seg>dhcpcd</seg>
@@ -240,4 +240,3 @@
   </sect2>
 
 </sect1>
-

Modified: trunk/BOOK/connect/dialup/wvdial.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/connect/dialup/wvdial.xml	2005-07-27 20:49:55 UTC (rev 4806)
+++ trunk/BOOK/connect/dialup/wvdial.xml	2005-07-27 21:24:52 UTC (rev 4807)
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@
       <varlistentry id="wvdial-prog">
         <term><command>wvdial</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Starts a PPP connection.</para>
+          <para>starts a PPP connection.</para>
           <indexterm zone="wvdial wvdial-prog">
             <primary sortas="b-wvdial">wvdial</primary>
           </indexterm>
@@ -172,4 +172,3 @@
   </sect2>
 
 </sect1>
-

Modified: trunk/BOOK/connect/other/other.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/connect/other/other.xml	2005-07-27 20:49:55 UTC (rev 4806)
+++ trunk/BOOK/connect/other/other.xml	2005-07-27 21:24:52 UTC (rev 4807)
@@ -13,7 +13,8 @@
   <para>Other methods to connect to large networks are through ISDN
   and PPPoE interfaces, among others. PPPoE is discussed here.
   Pages written for ISDN (or others as the need arises) are always welcome
-  and will be included in future books, if available.</para>
+  and will be included in future books, if the information becomes
+  available.</para>
 
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="pppoe.xml"/>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/connect/other/pppoe.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/connect/other/pppoe.xml	2005-07-27 20:49:55 UTC (rev 4806)
+++ trunk/BOOK/connect/other/pppoe.xml	2005-07-27 21:24:52 UTC (rev 4807)
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
     <para><xref linkend="ppp"/> and
     <xref linkend="net-tools"/> (you may omit
     <application>Net-tools</application> by using the following patch to
-    utilize <application>IPRoute2</application>: <ulink
+    utilize <application>IPRoute2</application> instead: <ulink
     url="&patch-root;/rp-pppoe-&pppoe-version;-iproute2-1.patch"/>)</para>
 
   </sect2>
@@ -85,7 +85,8 @@
 
     <para>Fix the location of the logger executable in several ADSL scripts:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput>sed -i s%/usr/bin/logger%/bin/logger% scripts/adsl-{connect,setup,stop}.in</userinput></screen>
+<screen><userinput>sed -i s%/usr/bin/logger%/bin/logger% \
+    scripts/adsl-{connect,setup,stop}.in</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>Install <application>RP-PPPoE</application> by running the following
     commands:</para>
@@ -105,11 +106,11 @@
   <sect2 role="commands">
     <title>Command Explanations</title>
 
-    <para>These are the standard installation commands that will install into
-    the <filename class="directory">/usr</filename> prefix.  You can optionally use the
-    <command>go</command> script in the root of the source tree, to
-    run the same commands, which are then immediately followed by the
-    <command>adsl-setup</command> script.</para>
+    <para>These are the standard installation commands that will install the
+    package into the <filename class="directory">/usr</filename> prefix.  You
+    can optionally use the <command>go</command> script in the root of the
+    source tree to run the same commands, which are then immediately followed
+    by the <command>adsl-setup</command> script.</para>
 
   </sect2>
 




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