r4806 - trunk/BOOK/general/prog

randy at linuxfromscratch.org randy at linuxfromscratch.org
Wed Jul 27 13:49:56 PDT 2005


Author: randy
Date: 2005-07-27 14:49:55 -0600 (Wed, 27 Jul 2005)
New Revision: 4806

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/general/prog/gcc3.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/prog/guile.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/prog/jdk.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/prog/python.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/prog/ruby.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/prog/tcl.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/prog/tk.xml
Log:
Fixed typos in various Chapter 12 package instructions

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/prog/gcc3.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/prog/gcc3.xml	2005-07-27 20:12:03 UTC (rev 4805)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/prog/gcc3.xml	2005-07-27 20:49:55 UTC (rev 4806)
@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@
     <segmentedlist>
       <segtitle>Installed Programs</segtitle>
       <segtitle>Installed Libraries</segtitle>
-      <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Directory</segtitle>
 
       <seglistitem>
         <seg>c++, cpp, g++, gcc, gccbug, gcov, and architecture specific
@@ -178,9 +178,9 @@
 
     <para>The GCC-&gcc3-version; package contains the
     <command>gcc</command>-&gcc3-version; <application>C</application> and
-    <application>C++</application> compilers and GCC-&gcc3-version;
-    <filename>libstdc++.so</filename> that is required by some commercial and
-    pre-compiled packages.</para>
+    <application>C++</application> compilers and the GCC-&gcc3-version;
+    <filename>libstdc++.so</filename> library that is required by some
+    commercial and pre-compiled packages.</para>
 
   </sect2>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/prog/guile.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/prog/guile.xml	2005-07-27 20:12:03 UTC (rev 4805)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/prog/guile.xml	2005-07-27 20:49:55 UTC (rev 4806)
@@ -66,6 +66,8 @@
 <screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr &&
 make</userinput></screen>
 
+    <para>To test the results, issue: <command>make check</command>.</para>
+
     <para>Now, as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>make install</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/prog/jdk.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/prog/jdk.xml	2005-07-27 20:12:03 UTC (rev 4805)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/prog/jdk.xml	2005-07-27 20:49:55 UTC (rev 4806)
@@ -230,8 +230,8 @@
       OTHER_CFLAGS/OTHER_CXXFLAGS/OTHER_LDFLAGS instead.</para>
     </warning>
 
-    <para>Additionally, if you would like to make in parallel, add the
-    following:</para>
+    <para>Additionally, if you would like to <command>make</command> in
+    parallel, add the following:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>export HOTSPOT_BUILD_JOBS=<replaceable>[3]</replaceable></userinput></screen>
 
@@ -252,7 +252,8 @@
 chown -v -R root:root /opt/jdk/jdk-&jdk-src-version; &&
 ln -sf motif21/libmawt.so  /opt/jdk/jdk-&jdk-src-version;/jre/lib/i386/</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Restore the environment using the following commands:</para>
+    <para>Restore the unprivileged user's environment using the following
+    commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>unset VERSION &&
 unset MV &&
@@ -271,7 +272,7 @@
   <sect2 role="commands">
     <title>Command Explanations</title>
 
-    <para><command>export ALT_BOOTDIR="$JAVA_HOME"</command>: This var sets
+    <para><command>export ALT_BOOTDIR="$JAVA_HOME"</command>: This variable sets
     the location of the bootstrap <application>JDK</application>.</para>
 
     <para><command>export ALT_MOZILLA_PATH=$PWD</command>: This tells the build
@@ -295,7 +296,7 @@
     instructions.</para>
 
     <para><command>unset CLASSPATH</command>: This clears the
-    <envar>CLASSPATH</envar> variable as per the recommendations in the build
+    <envar>CLASSPATH</envar> variable as recommended by the build
     instructions.</para>
 
     <para><command>unset CFLAGS/CXXFLAGS...</command>: These variables cause
@@ -368,16 +369,16 @@
 # End /etc/profile.d/jdk.sh</literal>
 EOF</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>The <application>Java</application> plugin is loacated in
+    <para>The <application>Java</application> plugin is located in
     <filename class="directory">$JAVA_HOME/jre/plugin/i?86/ns7/</filename>.
-    Make a symbolic link to the file in that directory from your browser
+    Make a symbolic link to the file in that directory from your browser(s)
     plugins directory.</para>
 
-    <note>
+    <important>
       <para>The plugin must be a symlink for it to work. If not, the browsers
-      just crash when you attempt to load a <application>Java</application>
+      will crash when you attempt to load a <application>Java</application>
       application.</para>
-    </note>
+    </important>
 
     </sect3>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/prog/python.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/prog/python.xml	2005-07-27 20:12:03 UTC (rev 4805)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/prog/python.xml	2005-07-27 20:49:55 UTC (rev 4806)
@@ -92,9 +92,9 @@
 
     <note>
       <para>There is no documentation installed using the instructions above.
-      However, There are Latex sources included with the distribution. See the
+      However, There are LaTeX sources included with the distribution. See the
       <filename>Doc/README</filename> file in the source distribution for
-      instructions to format the LaTex sources. Alternatively, you can download
+      instructions to format the LaTeX sources. Alternatively, you can download
       preformatted documentation from
       <ulink url="http://www.python.org/doc/current/download.html"/>.</para>
     </note>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/prog/ruby.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/prog/ruby.xml	2005-07-27 20:12:03 UTC (rev 4805)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/prog/ruby.xml	2005-07-27 20:49:55 UTC (rev 4806)
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
     <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Optional</bridgehead>
     <para><xref linkend="openssl"/>,
     <xref linkend="tk"/>,
-    <xref linkend="db"/>,
+    <xref linkend="db"/> and
     <xref linkend="gdbm"/></para>
 
   </sect2>
@@ -72,9 +72,11 @@
     commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr --enable-shared \
---enable-pthread --enable-install-doc &&
+    --enable-pthread --enable-install-doc &&
 make</userinput></screen>
 
+    <para>To test the results, issue: <command>make test</command>.</para>
+
     <para>Now, as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>make install</userinput></screen>
@@ -173,4 +175,3 @@
   </sect2>
 
 </sect1>
-

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/prog/tcl.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/prog/tcl.xml	2005-07-27 20:12:03 UTC (rev 4805)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/prog/tcl.xml	2005-07-27 20:49:55 UTC (rev 4806)
@@ -122,11 +122,11 @@
     to build with thread support.</para>
 
     <para><command>sed -i ...</command>: The <application>Tcl</application>
-    package assumes that the source that is used to build
+    package assumes that the source used to build
     <application>Tcl</application> is always kept around for compiling packages
     that depend on <application>Tcl</application>. These <command>sed</command>s
-    remove the reference to the build directory and replace them by saner system
-    wide locations.</para>
+    remove the reference to the build directory and replace them by saner
+    system-wide locations.</para>
 
     <para><command>install ...</command>: These commands install the internal
     headers into a system-wide location.</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/prog/tk.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/prog/tk.xml	2005-07-27 20:12:03 UTC (rev 4805)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/prog/tk.xml	2005-07-27 20:49:55 UTC (rev 4806)
@@ -120,10 +120,10 @@
     to build with thread support.</para>
 
     <para><command>sed -i ...</command>: The <application>Tk</application> package
-    assumes that the source that is used to build <application>Tk</application> is
+    assumes that the source used to build <application>Tk</application> is
     always kept around for compiling packages that depend on
-    <application>Tk</application>. These <command>sed</command>'s remove the
-    reference to the build directory and replace them by saner system wide
+    <application>Tk</application>. These <command>sed</command>s remove the
+    reference to the build directory and replace them by saner system-wide
     locations.</para>
 
     <para><command>install ...</command>: These commands install the internal
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@
         <listitem>
           <para> is a symlink to the <command>wish8.4</command> program.</para>
           <indexterm zone="tk wish">
-            <primary sortas="b-wish">wish</primary>
+            <primary sortas="g-wish">wish</primary>
           </indexterm>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>




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