r4803 - trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils

randy at linuxfromscratch.org randy at linuxfromscratch.org
Wed Jul 27 11:06:01 PDT 2005


Author: randy
Date: 2005-07-27 12:05:59 -0600 (Wed, 27 Jul 2005)
New Revision: 4803

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/cpio.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/fcron.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/hdparm.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/mc.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/which.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/zip.xml
Log:
Fixed typos in various Chapter 11 package instructions

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/cpio.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/cpio.xml	2005-07-27 17:27:47 UTC (rev 4802)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/cpio.xml	2005-07-27 18:05:59 UTC (rev 4803)
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
     <title>Command Explanations</title>
 
     <para><command>sed -i -e "s/invalid_arg/argmatch_invalid/" src/mt.c</command>:
-    This command fixes a build problem in the <command>mt</command> program.</para>
+    This command fixes a build problem with the <command>mt</command> program.</para>
 
     <para><parameter>CPIO_MT_PROG=mt</parameter>: This parameter forces the
     building and installation of the <command>mt</command> program.</para>
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@
 
     <para><parameter>--with-rmt=/usr/sbin/rmt</parameter>: This parameter inhibits
     building the <command>rmt</command> program as it is already installed by the
-    <application>tar</application> package in LFS.</para>
+    <application>Tar</application> package in LFS.</para>
 
     <para><command>echo "#define HAVE_SETLOCALE 1" >> config.h</command>:
     This command specifies that the system <application>Libc</application> implements the
@@ -154,4 +154,3 @@
   </sect2>
 
 </sect1>
-

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/fcron.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/fcron.xml	2005-07-27 17:27:47 UTC (rev 4802)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/fcron.xml	2005-07-27 18:05:59 UTC (rev 4803)
@@ -75,7 +75,8 @@
     does not set up this facility in <filename>/etc/syslog.conf</filename>, it
     needs to be done prior to installing <application>Fcron</application>. This
     command will append the necessary line to the current
-    <filename>/etc/syslog.conf</filename>:</para>
+    <filename>/etc/syslog.conf</filename> (perform as the
+    <systemitem class='username'>root</systemitem> user):</para>
 
     <indexterm zone="fcron fcron-syslog">
       <primary sortas="e-etc-syslog.conf">/etc/syslog.conf</primary>
@@ -90,12 +91,14 @@
 EOF</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>The configuration file has been modified, so reloading the
-    <command>sysklogd</command> daemon will activate the changes.</para>
+    <command>sysklogd</command> daemon will activate the changes (again as the
+    <systemitem class='username'>root</systemitem> user).</para>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>/etc/rc.d/init.d/sysklogd reload</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>For security reasons, an unprivileged user and group for
-    <application>Fcron</application> should be created:</para>
+    <application>Fcron</application> should be created (perform as the
+    <systemitem class='username'>root</systemitem> user):</para>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>groupadd -g 22 fcron &&
 useradd -d /dev/null -c "Fcron User" -g fcron -s /bin/false -u 22 fcron</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/hdparm.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/hdparm.xml	2005-07-27 17:27:47 UTC (rev 4802)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/hdparm.xml	2005-07-27 18:05:59 UTC (rev 4803)
@@ -37,8 +37,8 @@
       <para>As well as being useful, incorrect usage of
       <application>hdparm</application> can destroy your information and in
       rare cases, drives. Use with caution and make sure you know what you are
-      doing. If in doubt, we recommend you leave the default kernel parameters
-      alone.</para>
+      doing. If in doubt, it is recommended that you leave the default kernel
+      parameters alone.</para>
     </warning>
 
     <bridgehead renderas="sect3">Package Information</bridgehead>
@@ -126,4 +126,3 @@
   </sect2>
 
 </sect1>
-

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/mc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/mc.xml	2005-07-27 17:27:47 UTC (rev 4802)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/mc.xml	2005-07-27 18:05:59 UTC (rev 4803)
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
 <screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr &&
 make</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>This package does not come with a testsuite.</para>
+    <para>This package does not come with a test suite.</para>
     
     <para>Now, as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
 
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@
       <seglistitem>
         <seg>mc, mcedit, mcmfmt, and mcview</seg>
         <seg>None</seg>
-        <seg>/usr/share/mc, /usr/lib/mc</seg>
+        <seg>/usr/share/mc and /usr/lib/mc</seg>
       </seglistitem>
     </segmentedlist>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/which.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/which.xml	2005-07-27 17:27:47 UTC (rev 4802)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/which.xml	2005-07-27 18:05:59 UTC (rev 4803)
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
   <!ENTITY which-md5sum        "830b83af48347a9a3520f561e47cbc9b">
   <!ENTITY which-size          "123 KB">
   <!ENTITY which-buildsize     "940 KB">
-  <!ENTITY which-time          "0.03 SBU">
+  <!ENTITY which-time          "less than 0.1 SBU">
 ]>
 
 <sect1 id="which" xreflabel="which-&which-version;">
@@ -33,8 +33,8 @@
   your system with <command>which</command>. The question of which
   <quote><command>which</command></quote> is for you to decide.</para>
 
-  <para>The first option is to install the actual GNU program
-  <application>which</application>.</para>
+  <para>The first option is to install the actual GNU
+  <application>which</application> package.</para>
 
   <sect2 role="package">
     <title>Introduction to Which</title>
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>The 'which' Script</title>
 
-    <para>The second option (for those who don't want to install the program)
+    <para>The second option (for those who don't want to install the package)
     is to create a simple script (execute as the
     <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user):</para>
 
@@ -135,4 +135,3 @@
   </sect2>
 
 </sect1>
-

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/zip.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/zip.xml	2005-07-27 17:27:47 UTC (rev 4802)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/zip.xml	2005-07-27 18:05:59 UTC (rev 4803)
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
     command overrides the <varname>prefix</varname> variable that is set to
     <filename class='directory'>/usr/local</filename> in the
     <filename>unix/Makefile</filename> which is used as a
-    <command>Makefile</command> and builds the executables for a Linux system. The
+    <filename>Makefile</filename> and builds the executables for a Linux system. The
     alternatives to <option>generic_gcc</option> can be seen with a
     <command>make -f unix/Makefile list</command> command.</para>
 




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