r4800 - in trunk/BOOK: general/genlib server/major server/other x/installing

randy at linuxfromscratch.org randy at linuxfromscratch.org
Wed Jul 27 09:35:27 PDT 2005


Author: randy
Date: 2005-07-27 10:35:22 -0600 (Wed, 27 Jul 2005)
New Revision: 4800

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/fam.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/ispell.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libcroco.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libesmtp.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libusb.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/pcre.xml
   trunk/BOOK/server/major/bind.xml
   trunk/BOOK/server/major/proftpd.xml
   trunk/BOOK/server/other/svnserver.xml
   trunk/BOOK/x/installing/xfree86.xml
   trunk/BOOK/x/installing/xorg.xml
Log:
Fixed typos in various Chapter 8 package instructions; substituted 'regular user' with 'unprivileged user' where appropriate

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/fam.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/fam.xml	2005-07-27 02:47:53 UTC (rev 4799)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/fam.xml	2005-07-27 16:35:22 UTC (rev 4800)
@@ -144,16 +144,18 @@
     <sect3>
       <title>Configuration Information</title>
 
-      <para>Configuring the File Alteration Monitor.</para>
+      <para>Configuring the File Alteration Monitor. Perform the following
+      instructions as the <systemitem class='username'>root</systemitem>
+      user.</para>
 
-      <para>If you use <application>inetd</application>, add the
+      <para>If you use <command>inetd</command>, add the
       <application>FAM</application> entry to
       <filename>/etc/inetd.conf</filename> with the following command:</para>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>echo "sgi_fam/1-2 stream  rpc/tcp wait root /usr/sbin/famd fam" \
     >> /etc/inetd.conf</userinput></screen>
 
-      <para>If you use <application>xinetd</application>, the following command will
+      <para>If you use <command>xinetd</command>, the following command will
       create the <application>FAM</application> file as
       <filename>/etc/xinetd.d/sgi_fam</filename> (be sure the
       <systemitem class="groupname">nogroup</systemitem> group exists):</para>
@@ -239,4 +241,3 @@
   </sect2>
 
 </sect1>
-

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/ispell.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/ispell.xml	2005-07-27 02:47:53 UTC (rev 4799)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/ispell.xml	2005-07-27 16:35:22 UTC (rev 4800)
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@
     <segmentedlist>
       <segtitle>Installed Program</segtitle>
       <segtitle>Installed Libraries</segtitle>
-      <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Directory</segtitle>
 
       <seglistitem>
         <seg>ispell</seg>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libcroco.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libcroco.xml	2005-07-27 02:47:53 UTC (rev 4799)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libcroco.xml	2005-07-27 16:35:22 UTC (rev 4800)
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@
 <screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr &&
 make</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>This package does not come with a testsuite.</para>
+    <para>This package does not come with a test suite.</para>
 
     <para>Now, as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
 
@@ -85,8 +85,8 @@
 
     <segmentedlist>
       <segtitle>Installed Program</segtitle>
-      <segtitle>Installed Libray</segtitle>
-      <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Library</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Directory</segtitle>
 
       <seglistitem>
         <seg>csslint-0.6</seg>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libesmtp.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libesmtp.xml	2005-07-27 02:47:53 UTC (rev 4799)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libesmtp.xml	2005-07-27 16:35:22 UTC (rev 4800)
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
 <screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr &&
 make</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>This package does not come with a testsuite.</para>
+    <para>This package does not come with a test suite.</para>
 
     <para>Now, as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
 
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@
     <segmentedlist>
       <segtitle>Installed Program</segtitle>
       <segtitle>Installed Libraries</segtitle>
-      <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Directory</segtitle>
 
       <seglistitem>
         <seg>libesmtp-config</seg>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libusb.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libusb.xml	2005-07-27 02:47:53 UTC (rev 4799)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libusb.xml	2005-07-27 16:35:22 UTC (rev 4800)
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
   <!ENTITY libusb-md5sum "c6062b29acd2cef414bcc34e0decbdd1">
   <!ENTITY libusb-size "375 KB">
   <!ENTITY libusb-buildsize "7.4 MB (additional 1.3 MB to install documentation)">
-  <!ENTITY libusb-time "0.14 SBU (additional 0.08 SBU to build documentation)">
+  <!ENTITY libusb-time "0.1 SBU">
 ]>
 
 <sect1 id="libusb" xreflabel="libusb-&libusb-version;">
@@ -97,7 +97,8 @@
     as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>install -v -d -m755 /usr/share/doc/libusb-&libusb-version;/apidocs &&
-install -v -m644 apidocs/html/* /usr/share/doc/libusb-&libusb-version;/apidocs</userinput></screen>
+install -v -m644 apidocs/html/* \
+    /usr/share/doc/libusb-&libusb-version;/apidocs</userinput></screen>
 
   </sect2>
 
@@ -194,4 +195,3 @@
   </sect2>
 
 </sect1>
-

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/pcre.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/pcre.xml	2005-07-27 02:47:53 UTC (rev 4799)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/pcre.xml	2005-07-27 16:35:22 UTC (rev 4800)
@@ -77,12 +77,12 @@
 install -v -m644 doc/html/* /usr/share/doc/pcre-&pcre-version;/html &&
 install -v -m644 doc/{Tech.Notes,*.txt} /usr/share/doc/pcre-&pcre-version;</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>If you reinstall <application>grep</application> after installing
-    <application>pcre</application>, <application>grep</application> will get
-    linked against <application>pcre</application> and may cause problems if
+    <para>If you reinstall <application>Grep</application> after installing
+    <application>PCRE</application>, <application>Grep</application> will get
+    linked against <application>PCRE</application> and may cause problems if
     <filename class="directory">/usr</filename> is a separate mount point. To avoid
     this, either pass the option <option>--disable-perl-regexp</option> when executing
-    <command>./configure</command> for <application>grep</application> or move
+    <command>./configure</command> for <application>Grep</application> or move
     <filename class="libraryfile">libpcre</filename> to <filename
     class="directory">/lib</filename> as follows.</para>
 
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@
     <segmentedlist>
       <segtitle>Installed Programs</segtitle>
       <segtitle>Installed Libraries</segtitle>
-      <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Directory</segtitle>
 
       <seglistitem>
         <seg>pcregrep, pcretest, and pcre-config</seg>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/server/major/bind.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/server/major/bind.xml	2005-07-27 02:47:53 UTC (rev 4799)
+++ trunk/BOOK/server/major/bind.xml	2005-07-27 16:35:22 UTC (rev 4800)
@@ -89,7 +89,8 @@
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>bin/tests/system/ifconfig.sh up</userinput></screen> 
 
-    <para>Now run the test suite as a regular user:</para>
+    <para>Now run the test suite as an unprivileged user:</para>
+
 <screen><userinput>make check 2>&1 | tee check.log</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>Again as <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>, clean up the

Modified: trunk/BOOK/server/major/proftpd.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/server/major/proftpd.xml	2005-07-27 02:47:53 UTC (rev 4799)
+++ trunk/BOOK/server/major/proftpd.xml	2005-07-27 16:35:22 UTC (rev 4800)
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
 ln -v -s /bin/false /usr/lib/proftpd/proftpdshell &&
 echo /usr/lib/proftpd/proftpdshell >> /etc/shells</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Install <application>ProFTPD</application> as a regular user by
+    <para>Install <application>ProFTPD</application> as an unprivileged user by
     running the following commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>install_user=proftpd install_group=proftpd \
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@
     <application>ProFTPD</application>.</para>
 
     <para><command>ln -v -s /bin/false /usr/lib/proftpd/proftpdshell</command>:
-    Set the default shell as a link to a invalid shell.</para>
+    Set the default shell as a link to an invalid shell.</para>
 
     <para><command>echo /usr/lib/proftpd/proftpdshell >>
     /etc/shells</command>: Fake a valid shell for compatability purposes.</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/server/other/svnserver.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/server/other/svnserver.xml	2005-07-27 02:47:53 UTC (rev 4799)
+++ trunk/BOOK/server/other/svnserver.xml	2005-07-27 16:35:22 UTC (rev 4800)
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@
       assigned to the svntest repository. As mentioned earlier, this eases
       administration of multiple repositories when using
       <application>OpenSSH</application> for authentication. Going forward,
-      you'll need to add your regular user, and any additional users that
+      you'll need to add your unprivileged user, and any additional users that
       you wish to have write access to the repository, to the
       <systemitem class="groupname">svn</systemitem> and
       <systemitem class="groupname">svntest</systemitem> groups.</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/x/installing/xfree86.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/x/installing/xfree86.xml	2005-07-27 02:47:53 UTC (rev 4799)
+++ trunk/BOOK/x/installing/xfree86.xml	2005-07-27 16:35:22 UTC (rev 4800)
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>cp -v lndir /usr/bin/</userinput></screen>
 
-      <para>And back as a regular user:</para>
+      <para>And back as an unprivileged user:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>popd</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/x/installing/xorg.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/x/installing/xorg.xml	2005-07-27 02:47:53 UTC (rev 4799)
+++ trunk/BOOK/x/installing/xorg.xml	2005-07-27 16:35:22 UTC (rev 4800)
@@ -213,7 +213,7 @@
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>cp -v lndir /usr/bin/</userinput></screen>
 
-      <para>And back as a regular user:</para>
+      <para>And back as an unprivileged user:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>popd</userinput></screen>
 




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