r4794 - trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security

randy at linuxfromscratch.org randy at linuxfromscratch.org
Tue Jul 26 12:30:57 PDT 2005


Author: randy
Date: 2005-07-26 13:30:56 -0600 (Tue, 26 Jul 2005)
New Revision: 4794

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/shadow.xml
Log:
Fixed typos in the Shadow instructions

Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/shadow.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/shadow.xml	2005-07-26 19:18:39 UTC (rev 4793)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/shadow.xml	2005-07-26 19:30:56 UTC (rev 4794)
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@
       the program).</para>
 
       <sect4>
-        <title>'login' (with Cracklib)</title>
+        <title>'login' (with CrackLib)</title>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>cat > /etc/pam.d/login << "EOF"
 <literal># Begin /etc/pam.d/login
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@
       </sect4>
 
       <sect4>
-        <title>'login' (without Cracklib)</title>
+        <title>'login' (without CrackLib)</title>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>cat > /etc/pam.d/login << "EOF"
 <literal># Begin /etc/pam.d/login
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@
       </sect4>
 
       <sect4>
-        <title>'passwd' (with Cracklib)</title>
+        <title>'passwd' (with CrackLib)</title>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>cat > /etc/pam.d/passwd << "EOF"
 <literal># Begin /etc/pam.d/passwd
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@
       </sect4>
 
       <sect4>
-        <title>'passwd' (without Cracklib)</title>
+        <title>'passwd' (without CrackLib)</title>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>cat > /etc/pam.d/passwd << "EOF"
 <literal># Begin /etc/pam.d/passwd
@@ -266,11 +266,11 @@
         <warning>
           <para>At this point, you should do a simple test to see if
           <application>Shadow</application> is working as expected. Open
-          another term and login as a user, then su to <systemitem
-          class="username">root</systemitem>. If you do not see any errors,
-          then all is well and you should proceed with the rest of the
+          another term and log in as a user, then <command>su</command> to
+          <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>. If you do not see any
+          errors, then all is well and you should proceed with the rest of the
           configuration. If you did receive errors, stop now and double check
-          the above configuration files manually.  If you cannot find, and
+          the above configuration files manually.  If you cannot find and
           fix the error, you should recompile <application>Shadow</application>
           replacing <option>--with-libpam</option> with
           <option>--without-libpam</option> in the above instructions. If you
@@ -372,7 +372,7 @@
     sed -i -e "s/^$FUNCTION/# &/" /etc/login.defs
 done</userinput></screen>
 
-        <para>If you have <application>cracklib</application> installed,
+        <para>If you have <application>CrackLib</application> installed,
         also comment out four more lines using the following command:</para>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>for FUNCTION in OBSCURE_CHECKS_ENAB CRACKLIB_DICTPATH \




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