r4757 - trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config

randy at linuxfromscratch.org randy at linuxfromscratch.org
Thu Jul 21 17:22:34 PDT 2005


Author: randy
Date: 2005-07-21 18:22:34 -0600 (Thu, 21 Jul 2005)
New Revision: 4757

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml
Log:
Fixed minor typos in the 'Creating a Boot Device' section

Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml	2005-07-22 00:09:20 UTC (rev 4756)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml	2005-07-22 00:22:34 UTC (rev 4757)
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
 
     <para>The software of today's systems has grown large.  Linux 2.6 no longer
     supports booting directly from a floppy.  In spite of this, there are solutions
-    available using older version of Linux.  One of the best is Tom's Root/Boot
+    available using older versions of Linux.  One of the best is Tom's Root/Boot
     Disk available at <ulink url='http://www.toms.net/rb/'/>.  This will provide a
     minimal Linux system on a single floppy disk and provides the ability to
     customize the contents of your disk if necessary.</para>
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@
     copy the image to a CD-ROM.</para>
 
     <para>In the future, the build instructions for this CD-ROM will be presented,
-    but they are not available at this writing.</para>
+    but they are not available at the time of this writing.</para>
 
   </sect2>
 
@@ -79,8 +79,8 @@
     that it is usually large enough to hold more than a minimal boot image.  You
     can save critical data to the drive as well as use it to diagnose and recover
     a damaged system.  Booting such a drive requires BIOS support, but building the
-    system consists of formatting the drive, adding <application>grub</application>
-    as well as the kernel and supporting files.</para>
+    system consists of formatting the drive, adding <application>GRUB</application>
+    as well as the Linux kernel and supporting files.</para>
 
   </sect2>
 




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