r4751 - trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome

randy at linuxfromscratch.org randy at linuxfromscratch.org
Thu Jul 21 13:59:21 PDT 2005


Author: randy
Date: 2005-07-21 14:59:21 -0600 (Thu, 21 Jul 2005)
New Revision: 4751

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/packages.xml
Log:
Typo fixes and minor wording changes to the 'Getting the Source Packages' page

Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/packages.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/packages.xml	2005-07-21 20:33:48 UTC (rev 4750)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/packages.xml	2005-07-21 20:59:21 UTC (rev 4751)
@@ -16,14 +16,15 @@
   <title>Getting the Source Packages</title>
 
   <para>Within the BLFS instructions, each package has two references for
-  finding the source files for the package—a http link and an ftp link.
-  Every effort has been made to ensure that these links are accurate.
-  Howerver, the World Wide Web is in continuous flux.  Packages are
-  moved or updated and the exact URL specified is not always available.</para>
+  finding the source files for the package—an http link and an ftp link
+  (some packages may only list one of these links). Every effort has been made
+  to ensure that these links are accurate. However, the World Wide Web is in
+  continuous flux. Packages are sometimes moved or updated and the exact URL
+  specified is not always available.</para>
 
   <para>To overcome this problem, the BLFS Team, with the assistance of <ulink
-  url='http://www.serverbeach.com'>Server Beach</ulink>, has made a http/ftp site
-  available at <emphasis>anduin.linuxfromscratch.org</emphasis>.  This site
+  url='http://www.serverbeach.com'>Server Beach</ulink>, has made an http/ftp
+  site available at <emphasis>anduin.linuxfromscratch.org</emphasis>.  This site
   has all the sources of the exact versions of the packages used in BLFS.  If
   you can't find the BLFS package you need, get it there.</para>
 




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