r4717 - in trunk/BOOK: . general/sysutils introduction/welcome

randy at linuxfromscratch.org randy at linuxfromscratch.org
Mon Jul 11 23:16:55 PDT 2005


Author: randy
Date: 2005-07-12 00:16:54 -0600 (Tue, 12 Jul 2005)
New Revision: 4717

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/general.ent
   trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/pciutils.xml
   trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml
Log:
Added verbose switches and grammar fixes to the PCI Utilities instructions

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/pciutils.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/pciutils.xml	2005-07-12 05:14:28 UTC (rev 4716)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/pciutils.xml	2005-07-12 06:16:54 UTC (rev 4717)
@@ -74,12 +74,13 @@
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>make PREFIX=/usr install</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Some packages require the pci static library. To install the library and
-	the headers, as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
+    <para>Some packages require the PCI static library. To install the library
+    and headers, issue the following commands as the
+    <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
 
-<screen role="root"><userinput>install -d /usr/include/pci &&
-install -m 644 lib/libpci.a /usr/lib &&
-install -m 644 lib/*.h /usr/include/pci</userinput></screen>
+<screen role="root"><userinput>install -v -m755 -d /usr/include/pci &&
+install -v -m 644 lib/libpci.a /usr/lib &&
+install -v -m 644 lib/*.h /usr/include/pci</userinput></screen>
 
   </sect2>
 
@@ -94,7 +95,7 @@
       <seglistitem>
         <seg>lspci, setpci and update-pciids</seg>
         <seg>libpci.a</seg>
-        <seg>None</seg>
+        <seg>/usr/include/pci</seg>
       </seglistitem>
     </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -138,7 +139,8 @@
       <varlistentry id="libpci">
       <term><filename role='library'>libpci.a</filename></term>
       <listitem>
-        <para> is the static library that allow applications to access PCI subsystem.</para>
+        <para> is the static library that allows applications to access the PCI
+        subsystem.</para>
         <indexterm zone="pciutils libpci">
           <primary sortas="c-libpci">libpci.a</primary>
         </indexterm>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general.ent
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general.ent	2005-07-12 05:14:28 UTC (rev 4716)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general.ent	2005-07-12 06:16:54 UTC (rev 4717)
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
-<!ENTITY day          "11">
+<!ENTITY day          "12">
 <!ENTITY month        "07">
 <!ENTITY year         "2005">
 <!ENTITY version      "svn-&year;&month;&day;">
 <!ENTITY releasedate  "July &day;th, &year;">
 <!ENTITY pubdate      "&year;-&month;-&day;"> <!-- metadata req. by TLDP -->
 <!ENTITY blfs-version "svn">                  <!-- svn|[release #] -->
-<!ENTITY lfs-version  "testing">          <!-- version|stable|testing|unstable|development] -->
+<!ENTITY lfs-version  "stable">          <!-- version|stable|testing|unstable|development] -->
 <!ENTITY last-commit  "$Date$"> <!-- Automatic update -->
 
 <!ENTITY maintainer-fullname  "Bruce Dubbs">

Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml	2005-07-12 05:14:28 UTC (rev 4716)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml	2005-07-12 06:16:54 UTC (rev 4717)
@@ -25,7 +25,8 @@
   <itemizedlist>
 
     <listitem>
-      <para>July 11th, 2005 [tushar]: Install static library and header in pciutils.</para>
+      <para>July 11th, 2005 [tushar]: Install static library and header in
+      PCI Utilities.</para>
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>




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