r3315 - in trunk/BOOK: basicnet/mailnews basicnet/netprogs book multimedia/libdriv x/wm xsoft/graphweb

randy at linuxfromscratch.org randy at linuxfromscratch.org
Wed Jan 19 12:15:28 PST 2005


Author: randy
Date: 2005-01-19 13:15:26 -0700 (Wed, 19 Jan 2005)
New Revision: 3315

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/basicnet/mailnews/other.xml
   trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/openssh-client.xml
   trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/rsync-client.xml
   trunk/BOOK/book/preface.xml
   trunk/BOOK/multimedia/libdriv/arts.xml
   trunk/BOOK/x/wm/wm.xml
   trunk/BOOK/xsoft/graphweb/konq.xml
Log:
Fixed typos, tag corrections

Modified: trunk/BOOK/basicnet/mailnews/other.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/basicnet/mailnews/other.xml	2005-01-19 19:45:19 UTC (rev 3314)
+++ trunk/BOOK/basicnet/mailnews/other.xml	2005-01-19 20:15:26 UTC (rev 3315)
@@ -16,10 +16,11 @@
 <para><xref linkend="pan"/> is a <acronym>GTK</acronym>2 based newsreader 
 program.</para>
 
-<para>KNode is a Qt based newsreader program from 
-<xref linkend="kdepim"/>.</para>
+<para><command>knode</command> is a <application>Qt</application> based 
+newsreader program from <xref linkend="kdepim"/>.</para>
 
-<para>KMail is a Qt based mail client from <xref linkend="kdepim"/>.</para>
+<para><command>kmail</command> is a <application>Qt</application> based mail 
+client from <xref linkend="kdepim"/>.</para>
 
 <para><xref linkend="balsa"/> is a <acronym>GTK</acronym>2 based mail client.
 </para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/openssh-client.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/openssh-client.xml	2005-01-19 19:45:19 UTC (rev 3314)
+++ trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/openssh-client.xml	2005-01-19 20:15:26 UTC (rev 3315)
@@ -13,12 +13,12 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="openssh.html"?>
 <title>OpenSSH-&openssh-version; client</title>
 
-<para>The ssh client is a secure replacement for telnet.  If you want to
-install it, the instructions can be found in Chapter 22 - <xref
-linkend="openssh"/>.  Note that if you only want to use the client, you
-do <emphasis>not</emphasis> need to run the server and so do not need
-the startup script and links.  In accordance with good practice, only
-run the server if you actually need it (and if you don't know whether
-you need it or not, it's likely that you don't!).</para>
+<para>The <command>ssh</command> client is a secure replacement for 
+<command>telnet</command>.  If you want to install it, the instructions can be 
+found in Chapter 22 – <xref linkend="openssh"/>.  Note that if you only 
+want to use the client, you do <emphasis>not</emphasis> need to run the server 
+and so do not need the startup script and links.  In accordance with good 
+practice, only run the server if you actually need it (and if you don't know 
+whether you need it or not, it's likely that you don't!).</para>
 
 </sect1>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/rsync-client.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/rsync-client.xml	2005-01-19 19:45:19 UTC (rev 3314)
+++ trunk/BOOK/basicnet/netprogs/rsync-client.xml	2005-01-19 20:15:26 UTC (rev 3315)
@@ -13,13 +13,13 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="rsync.html"?>
 <title>rsync-&rsync-version; client</title>
 
-<para>rsync is a utility for fast incremental file transfers. If you want to
-install it, the instructions can be found in Chapter 22 -
-<xref linkend="rsync"/>.  Note that if you only want to use the client, you do
-<emphasis>not</emphasis> need to run the server and so do not need the startup
-script and links.  In accordance with good practice, only run the server if you
-actually need it (and if you don't know whether you need it or not, it's
-likely that you don't!).</para>
+<para><command>rsync</command> is a utility for fast incremental file 
+transfers. If you want to install it, the instructions can be found in Chapter 
+22 – <xref linkend="rsync"/>.  Note that if you only want to use the 
+client, you do <emphasis>not</emphasis> need to run the server and so do not 
+need the startup script and links.  In accordance with good practice, only run 
+the server if you actually need it (and if you don't know whether you need it 
+or not, it's likely that you don't!).</para>
 
 </sect1>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/book/preface.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/book/preface.xml	2005-01-19 19:45:19 UTC (rev 3314)
+++ trunk/BOOK/book/preface.xml	2005-01-19 20:15:26 UTC (rev 3315)
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@
 applications are constantly updated and new applications are developed, this
 book will never be complete.  Additionally, there is always room for
 improvement in explaining the nuances of how to install the different packages.
-To make these improvements, we need your feedback.  I encourcage you to
+To make these improvements, we need your feedback.  I encourage you to
 participate on the different mailing lists, news groups, and
 <acronym>IRC</acronym> channels to help meet these goals.</para>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/multimedia/libdriv/arts.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/multimedia/libdriv/arts.xml	2005-01-19 19:45:19 UTC (rev 3314)
+++ trunk/BOOK/multimedia/libdriv/arts.xml	2005-01-19 20:15:26 UTC (rev 3315)
@@ -13,18 +13,20 @@
 <title>aRts-&arts-version;</title>
 
 <para>
-The Analog Real-time Synthesizer (<acronym>aRts</acronym>) provides  
+The Analog Real-time Synthesizer 
+(<application><acronym>aRts</acronym></application>) provides  
 software that can simulate a complete "modular analog synthesizer" on your 
 computer. It creates sounds and music using small modules like oscillators for 
 creating waveforms, various filters, modules for playing data on your speakers, 
-mixers, and faders. You can build a complete setup with the <acronym>GUI
-</acronym> of the system, using the modules: generators, effects and
-output -- connected to each other.</para>
+mixers, and faders. You can build a complete setup with the 
+<acronym>GUI</acronym> of the system, using the modules: generators, effects 
+and output — connected to each other.</para>
 
-<para><acronym>aRts</acronym> provides necessary libraries 
-for KDE, however it can be installed as a standalone package.  
-The installation instructions for aRts can be found in the 
-<xref linkend="kde-core-arts"/> portion
-of the KDE installation instructions.</para>
+<para><application><acronym>aRts</acronym></application> provides necessary 
+libraries for <acronym>KDE</acronym>, however it can be installed as a 
+standalone package. The installation instructions for 
+<application><acronym>aRts</acronym></application> can be found in the 
+<xref linkend="kde-core-arts"/> portion of the <acronym>KDE</acronym> 
+installation instructions.</para>
 
 </sect1>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/x/wm/wm.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/x/wm/wm.xml	2005-01-19 19:45:19 UTC (rev 3314)
+++ trunk/BOOK/x/wm/wm.xml	2005-01-19 20:15:26 UTC (rev 3315)
@@ -17,11 +17,11 @@
 <title>Introduction</title>
 
 <para>Window Mangers and Desktop Environments are the primary user
-interfaces into the <application>X</application> Window System.  A window manager is a program 
-that controls the appearance of windows and provides the means by which 
-the user can interact with them.  A Desktop Environment provides a more 
-complete interface to the operating system, and provides a range of 
-integrated utilities and applications.</para>
+interfaces into the <application>X</application> Window System.  A window 
+manager is a program that controls the appearance of windows and provides the 
+means by which the user can interact with them.  A Desktop Environment 
+provides a more complete interface to the operating system, and provides a 
+range of integrated utilities and applications.</para>
 
 <para>There are many Window Mangers available.  Some of the more well
 known ones include <application>fvwm2</application>, <application>Window
@@ -35,15 +35,16 @@
 <application><acronym>KDE</acronym></application>, and
 <application>XFce</application>.</para>
 
-<para>Choosing a Window Manager or Desktop Environment is highly 
-subjective.  The choice depends on the look and feel of the packages, the 
-resources (<acronym>RAM</acronym>, disk space) required, and the utilities included.  One web 
-site that provides a very good summary of what is available, screenshots, 
-and their respective features is <ulink url="http://www.plig.org/xwinman/">Window Managers for X</ulink>.</para>
+<para>Choosing a Window Manager or Desktop Environment is highly subjective. 
+The choice depends on the look and feel of the packages, the resources 
+(<acronym>RAM</acronym>, disk space) required, and the utilities included. 
+One web site that provides a very good summary of what is available, 
+screenshots, and their respective features is 
+<ulink url="http://www.plig.org/xwinman/">Window Managers for X</ulink>.</para>
 
-<para>In this chapter, the installation instructions of
-several Window Managers and one lightweight Desktop Environment are
-presented.  Later in the book, both <application><acronym>KDE</acronym></application> and
+<para>In this chapter, the installation instructions of several Window 
+Managers and one lightweight Desktop Environment are presented.  Later in the 
+book, both <application><acronym>KDE</acronym></application> and
 <application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> have their own
 sections.</para>
 </sect1>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/xsoft/graphweb/konq.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/xsoft/graphweb/konq.xml	2005-01-19 19:45:19 UTC (rev 3314)
+++ trunk/BOOK/xsoft/graphweb/konq.xml	2005-01-19 20:15:26 UTC (rev 3315)
@@ -13,7 +13,8 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="konq.html" ?>
 <title>Konqueror-&kde-version;</title>
 
-<para>Konqueror is the default graphical web browser for the KDE desktop
-environment.  It is packaged and installed with <xref linkend="kdebase"/>.</para>
+<para><command>konqueror</command> is the default graphical web browser for the 
+<acronym>KDE</acronym> desktop environment.  It is packaged and installed with 
+<xref linkend="kdebase"/>.</para>
 
 </sect1>




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