r5397 - in trunk/BOOK: . x/wm

randy at linuxfromscratch.org randy at linuxfromscratch.org
Fri Dec 9 23:41:55 PST 2005


Author: randy
Date: 2005-12-10 00:41:54 -0700 (Sat, 10 Dec 2005)
New Revision: 5397

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/general.ent
   trunk/BOOK/x/wm/fluxbox.xml
Log:
Added an FTP download URL and fixed some typos in the Fluxbox instructions

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general.ent
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general.ent	2005-12-09 22:48:12 UTC (rev 5396)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general.ent	2005-12-10 07:41:54 UTC (rev 5397)
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!ENTITY day          "09">
+<!ENTITY day          "10">
 <!ENTITY month        "12">
 <!ENTITY year         "2005">
 <!ENTITY version      "svn-&year;&month;&day;">

Modified: trunk/BOOK/x/wm/fluxbox.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/x/wm/fluxbox.xml	2005-12-09 22:48:12 UTC (rev 5396)
+++ trunk/BOOK/x/wm/fluxbox.xml	2005-12-10 07:41:54 UTC (rev 5397)
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   %general-entities;
 
   <!ENTITY fluxbox-download-http "http://prdownloads.sourceforge.net/fluxbox/fluxbox-&fluxbox-version;.tar.bz2">
-  <!ENTITY fluxbox-download-ftp  " ">
+  <!ENTITY fluxbox-download-ftp  "ftp://ftp.fu-berlin.de/unix/linux/mirrors/gentoo/distfiles/fluxbox-&fluxbox-version;.tar.bz2">
   <!ENTITY fluxbox-md5sum        "7641aaea532841e103e9705bb5b98f62">
   <!ENTITY fluxbox-size          "657 KB">
   <!ENTITY fluxbox-buildsize     "10 MB">
@@ -119,8 +119,9 @@
     <sect3>
       <title>Configuration Information</title>
 
-      <para>If Fluxbox is the only Window Manager you want to use you can start it with an
-      <filename>.xinitrc</filename> file in your home folder. Be sure to backup your 
+      <para>If <application>Fluxbox</application> is the only Window Manager
+      you want to use, you can start it with an <filename>.xinitrc</filename>
+      file in your home folder. Be sure to backup your 
       current <filename>.xinitrc</filename> before proceeding.</para>
 
       <indexterm zone="fluxbox fluxbox-config">
@@ -132,7 +133,7 @@
       <para>Or alternatively, if you use a login manager like 
       <xref linkend="gdm"/> or <application>kdm</application> and would
       like to be able to choose <application>Fluxbox</application> at the login 
-      prompt, create a <filename>fluxbox.desktop</filename> file like this</para>
+      prompt, create a <filename>fluxbox.desktop</filename> file like this.</para>
 
       <para>As <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>:</para>
 
@@ -145,10 +146,10 @@
 Type=Application</literal>
 EOF</userinput></screen>
 
+      <para>If you didn't install <xref linkend="gdm"/> or
+      <application>kdm</application> in <filename class='directory'>/usr</filename>,
+      then change that command to fit the prefix you chose.</para>
 
-      <para>If you didn't install <xref linkend="gdm"/> or <application>kdm</application>
-      in /usr then change that command to fit the prefix you chose.</para>
-
       <para>Now create the <application>Fluxbox</application> configuration
       files:</para>
 
@@ -156,17 +157,17 @@
 cp -v /usr/share/fluxbox/init ~/.fluxbox/init &&
 cp -v /usr/share/fluxbox/keys ~/.fluxbox/keys</userinput></screen>
 
-      <para>Now if you have <application>Which</application> installed.</para>
+      <para>Now if you have <application>Which</application> installed:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>cd ~/.fluxbox &&
 fluxbox-generate_menu</userinput></screen>
 
       <para>Else, if you do not have <application>Which</application>
-      installed.</para>
+      installed:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>cp -v /usr/share/fluxbox/menu ~/.fluxbox/menu</userinput></screen>
 
-      <para>Menu Items are added by editing <filename>~/.fluxbox/menu</filename>.
+      <para>Menu items are added by editing <filename>~/.fluxbox/menu</filename>.
       The syntax is explained on the <command>fluxbox</command> man page.</para>
 
     </sect3>




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