r4944 - trunk/edguide

bdubbs at linuxfromscratch.org bdubbs at linuxfromscratch.org
Wed Aug 17 09:20:57 PDT 2005


Author: bdubbs
Date: 2005-08-17 10:20:56 -0600 (Wed, 17 Aug 2005)
New Revision: 4944

Modified:
   trunk/edguide/chapter01.xml
   trunk/edguide/chapter04.xml
   trunk/edguide/chapter05.xml
Log:
Fix edguide typos

Modified: trunk/edguide/chapter01.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/edguide/chapter01.xml	2005-08-17 02:18:47 UTC (rev 4943)
+++ trunk/edguide/chapter01.xml	2005-08-17 16:20:56 UTC (rev 4944)
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
 <para>The actual BLFS book itself is written using Docbook-XML
 (http://www.docbook.org/tdg/en/html/) and at first can seem to be a daunting
 tangle of files.  Basically, if you're confused, start by looking at
-<filename>index.xml</filename>.  You can see that the files is a well formed
+<filename>index.xml</filename>.  You can see that the file is a well formed
 xml file that includes other files.  These included files reflect the
 organization of the book.  It is divided into Front Matter, Parts, and
 Appendices.  Parts are divided into Chapters and the Chapters are again

Modified: trunk/edguide/chapter04.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/edguide/chapter04.xml	2005-08-17 02:18:47 UTC (rev 4943)
+++ trunk/edguide/chapter04.xml	2005-08-17 16:20:56 UTC (rev 4944)
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@
 reports when svn doesn't manage a file.  Generally it means that you've
 forgotten to <userinput>svn add</userinput> a file to the repository but can
 also just be temporary editor files which  <application>svn</application>
-doesn't know what to do with.  If it's just t temporary file, don't worry, it
+doesn't know what to do with.  If it's just a temporary file, don't worry, it
 won't try and commit them when you do a <userinput>svn commit</userinput>
 because you haven't added them.  Instead it'll just leave them alone.</para>
 

Modified: trunk/edguide/chapter05.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/edguide/chapter05.xml	2005-08-17 02:18:47 UTC (rev 4943)
+++ trunk/edguide/chapter05.xml	2005-08-17 16:20:56 UTC (rev 4944)
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 Bugzilla for entering new bugs into the system, and fixing/updating
 outstanding bugs.</para>
 
-<para>It's assume you have already logged into Bugzilla before doing anything
+<para>It's assumed you have already logged into Bugzilla before doing anything
 outlined in the following sections.</para>
 
 </section>
@@ -50,12 +50,10 @@
 <itemizedlist>
 <listitem><para>Go to <ulink url="&blfs-bugzilla;"/></para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>Select the proper <emphasis>Version</emphasis>. You most
-always will choose the <emphasis>CVS</emphasis> version. (Note: SVN will be
-added to the options.  Use that if you see it.) The other versions
-are basically there only for people who don't edit the book
-and who want to report a bug against the book version they
-have.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>Select the proper <emphasis>Version</emphasis>. You most always
+will choose the <emphasis>SVN</emphasis> version.  The other versions are
+basically there only for people who don't edit the book and who want to report
+a bug against the book version they have.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>Don't worry about <emphasis>Platform, OS, and Severity</emphasis>. 
 Those aren't used at the moment.</para></listitem>




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