r2761 - in trunk/BOOK: . connect/other introduction/welcome server/other

dj at linuxfromscratch.org dj at linuxfromscratch.org
Sun Oct 3 07:21:27 PDT 2004


Author: dj
Date: 2004-10-03 08:21:25 -0600 (Sun, 03 Oct 2004)
New Revision: 2761

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/connect/other/pppoe.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general.ent
   trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml
   trunk/BOOK/server/other/dhcp.xml
Log:
Fix typos and styles from last night's commit.

Modified: trunk/BOOK/connect/other/pppoe.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/connect/other/pppoe.xml	2004-10-03 02:20:23 UTC (rev 2760)
+++ trunk/BOOK/connect/other/pppoe.xml	2004-10-03 14:21:25 UTC (rev 2761)
@@ -45,8 +45,7 @@
                                                                                 
 <sect3><title><application><acronym>RP</acronym>-<acronym>PPPoE</acronym></application> dependencies</title>
 <sect4><title>Required</title>
-<para><xref linkend="ppp"/></para>
-<para><xref linkend="net-tools"/></para></sect4>
+<para><xref linkend="ppp"/> and <xref linkend="net-tools"/></para></sect4>
 </sect3>
 
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general.ent
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general.ent	2004-10-03 02:20:23 UTC (rev 2760)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general.ent	2004-10-03 14:21:25 UTC (rev 2761)
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 <!ENTITY month        "10">
 <!ENTITY year         "2004">
 <!ENTITY version      "svn-&year;&month;&day;">
-<!ENTITY releasedate  "September &day;nd, &year;">
+<!ENTITY releasedate  "Ocotober &day;nd, &year;">
 <!ENTITY pubdate      "&year;-&month;-&day;"> <!-- metadata req. by TLDP -->
 <!ENTITY blfs-version "cvs">                  <!-- cvs|[release #] -->
 <!ENTITY lfs-version  "testing">              <!-- stable|testing|unstable] -->

Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml	2004-10-03 02:20:23 UTC (rev 2760)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml	2004-10-03 14:21:25 UTC (rev 2761)
@@ -22,8 +22,8 @@
 
 <itemizedlist>
 
-<listitem><para>October 2nd, 2004 [dj]: Added net-tools as a dependacy
-for RP-PPPoE.  Made iproute2 patch to optional for dhcp.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>October 2nd, 2004 [dj]: Added net-tools as a dependency
+for RP-PPPoE.  Made iproute2 patch optional for dhcp.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>September 27th, 2004 [Randy]: Modified Ethereal 
 configuration instructions as suggested by Bruce Dubbs; modified 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/server/other/dhcp.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/server/other/dhcp.xml	2004-10-03 02:20:23 UTC (rev 2760)
+++ trunk/BOOK/server/other/dhcp.xml	2004-10-03 14:21:25 UTC (rev 2761)
@@ -45,17 +45,11 @@
 
 <sect3><title><application>dhcp</application> dependencies</title>
 <sect4><title>Required</title>
-<para><xref linkend="net-tools"/></para></sect4>
+<para><xref linkend="net-tools"/> You may omit installing net-tools
+by using the following patch to utilize iproute2:
+<ulink url="&patch-root;/dhcp-&dhcp-version;-iproute2-1.patch"/>.</para></sect4>
 </sect3>
 
-<sect3><title>Additional downloads</title>
-<itemizedlist spacing='compact'>
-<listitem><para>Optional Patch to use iproute2 (this removes the
-dependacy on net-tools):
-<ulink url="&patch-root;/dhcp-&dhcp-version;-iproute2-1.patch"/></para></listitem>
-</itemizedlist>
-</sect3>
-
 </sect2>
 
 <sect2>




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