cvs commit: BLFS/BOOK/general/sysutils/zip zip-desc.xml zip-exp.xml

bdubbs at linuxfromscratch.org bdubbs at linuxfromscratch.org
Mon May 31 15:41:23 PDT 2004


bdubbs      04/05/31 16:41:23

  Modified:    BOOK/general/sysutils which.xml
               BOOK/general/sysutils/cpio cpio-exp.xml
               BOOK/general/sysutils/fcron fcron-config.xml fcron-exp.xml
               BOOK/general/sysutils/pkgconfig pkgconfig-intro.xml
               BOOK/general/sysutils/zip zip-desc.xml zip-exp.xml
  Log:
  Grammar updates
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.11      +4 -4      BLFS/BOOK/general/sysutils/which.xml
  
  Index: which.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/general/sysutils/which.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.10
  retrieving revision 1.11
  diff -u -r1.10 -r1.11
  --- which.xml	13 May 2004 14:43:49 -0000	1.10
  +++ which.xml	31 May 2004 22:41:22 -0000	1.11
  @@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
   <?dbhtml filename="which.html"?>
   <title>which-&which-version; and alternatives</title>
   
  -<para>The presence / absence of the which program in the main <acronym>LFS
  +<para>The presence or absence of the which program in the main <acronym>LFS
   </acronym> book is probably one of the most contentious issues we have on the 
  -mailing lists.  It has resulted in at least one flame war in the recent past.
  +mailing lists.  It has resulted in at least one flame war in the past.
   To hopefully put an end to this once and for all, we here present two of
   the options for equipping your system with "which". The question of which "which"
   is for you to decide.</para>
  @@ -25,8 +25,8 @@
   <command>EOF
   chmod 755 /usr/bin/which
   chown root:root /usr/bin/which</command></userinput></screen>
  -<para>This should generally work OK and is probably the easiest solution
  -for boxes which don't need a good user environment to work in.</para>
  +<para>This should work OK and is probably the easiest solution
  +for most cases, but is not the most comprehensive implementation.</para>
   </sect2>
   
   </sect1>
  
  
  
  1.9       +8 -6      BLFS/BOOK/general/sysutils/cpio/cpio-exp.xml
  
  Index: cpio-exp.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/general/sysutils/cpio/cpio-exp.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.8
  retrieving revision 1.9
  diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
  --- cpio-exp.xml	16 Nov 2003 15:12:06 -0000	1.8
  +++ cpio-exp.xml	31 May 2004 22:41:22 -0000	1.9
  @@ -1,14 +1,16 @@
   <sect2>
   <title>Command explanations</title>
   
  -<para><parameter>--libexec=/tmp/cpio</parameter>: This command installs
  -<command>rmt</command> to <filename class="directory">/tmp/cpio</filename> so that
  -it can be removed. The <command>rmt</command> executable is already installed by
  -<application>tar</application> package in <acronym>LFS</acronym>.</para>
  +<para><parameter>--libexec=/tmp/cpio</parameter>: This command installs the
  +<command>rmt</command> to <filename class="directory">/tmp/cpio</filename> so
  +that it can be removed. The <command>rmt</command> executable is already
  +installed by <application>tar</application> package in
  +<acronym>LFS</acronym>.</para>
   
   <para><parameter>--bindir=/bin</parameter>: This command installs
  -<command>cpio</command> to <filename class="directory">/bin</filename> instead of
  -<filename class="directory">/usr/bin</filename> as per <acronym>FHS</acronym> guidelines.</para>
  +<command>cpio</command> to <filename class="directory">/bin</filename> instead
  +of <filename class="directory">/usr/bin</filename> as per
  +<acronym>FHS</acronym> guidelines.</para>
   
   </sect2>
   
  
  
  
  1.11      +2 -3      BLFS/BOOK/general/sysutils/fcron/fcron-config.xml
  
  Index: fcron-config.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/general/sysutils/fcron/fcron-config.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.10
  retrieving revision 1.11
  diff -u -r1.10 -r1.11
  --- fcron-config.xml	22 Mar 2004 07:42:21 -0000	1.10
  +++ fcron-config.xml	31 May 2004 22:41:22 -0000	1.11
  @@ -16,10 +16,9 @@
   <filename>fcron.conf</filename>.</para>
   
   <para><command>fcron</command> scripts are written using <command>fcrontab</command>.
  -Refer to the man page for fcrontab for proper parameters for your 
  -situation.</para>
  +Refer to the fcrontab man page for proper parameters to address your situation.</para>
   
  -<para>Install <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/fcron</filename>
  +<para>Install ithe <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/fcron</filename>
   init script from the <xref linkend="intro-important-bootscripts"/> package.</para>
                                                                                                                   
   <screen><userinput><command>make install-fcron</command></userinput></screen>
  
  
  
  1.12      +14 -16    BLFS/BOOK/general/sysutils/fcron/fcron-exp.xml
  
  Index: fcron-exp.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/general/sysutils/fcron/fcron-exp.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.11
  retrieving revision 1.12
  diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12
  --- fcron-exp.xml	15 Jan 2004 21:00:18 -0000	1.11
  +++ fcron-exp.xml	31 May 2004 22:41:22 -0000	1.12
  @@ -1,26 +1,24 @@
   <sect2>
   <title>Command explanations</title>
   
  -<para><option>--without-sendmail</option>: <application>Fcron</application> 
  -does not require an <acronym>MTA</acronym> to run but will use one, if it is 
  -installed, to email you the results of the <command>fcron</command> script. If 
  -you wish to utilize this feature change the switch to 
  -<parameter>--with-sendmail=<replaceable>[path to your MTA]</replaceable>
  -</parameter>.</para>
  +<para><option>--without-sendmail</option>: <application>Fcron</application>
  +will use an iinstalled <acronym>MTA</acronym> to email you the results of the
  +<command>fcron</command> script. If you wish to utilize this feature, change
  +the switch to <parameter>--with-sendmail=<replaceable>[path to your
  +MTA]</replaceable> </parameter>.</para>
   
   <para><parameter>--with-answer-all=no</parameter>: After the files are
  -installed, the make install script enters into a configuration routine.
  -The first test will be whether to install a boot script in the <filename
  -class="directory">/etc/rc.d/init.d</filename> directory with the 
  -appropriate symbolic links in run levels 2, 3, 4, and 5. The second is to 
  -stop any current fcron processes and start a new one. Since this is
  -probably your first install and we want a boot script based upon the
  -<acronym>BLFS</acronym> template we answer 'n' to both tests.</para>
  +installed, the <command>make install</command> script enters into a
  +configuration routine.  The first test will be whether to install a boot script
  +in the <filename class="directory">/etc/rc.d/init.d</filename> directory with
  +the appropriate symbolic links in run levels 2, 3, 4, and 5. The second is to
  +stop any current fcron processes and start a new one. Since this is probably
  +your first install and we want a boot script based upon the
  +<acronym>BLFS</acronym> template, we answer 'n' to both tests.</para>
   
   <para><parameter>--with-dsssl-dir=/usr/share/sgml/docbook/dsssl-stylesheets-&docbook-dsssl-version;
   </parameter>: This switch can be added if you have installed
  -<application>OpenJade</application> and
  -dsssl-stylesheets to generate the documentation from the DocBook source
  -files.</para>
  +<application>OpenJade</application> and dsssl-stylesheets to generate the
  +documentation from the DocBook source files.</para>
   
   </sect2>
  
  
  
  1.6       +2 -2      BLFS/BOOK/general/sysutils/pkgconfig/pkgconfig-intro.xml
  
  Index: pkgconfig-intro.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/general/sysutils/pkgconfig/pkgconfig-intro.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.5
  retrieving revision 1.6
  diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
  --- pkgconfig-intro.xml	21 Sep 2003 19:34:43 -0000	1.5
  +++ pkgconfig-intro.xml	31 May 2004 22:41:22 -0000	1.6
  @@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
   <title>Introduction to <application>pkgconfig</application></title>
   
   <para>The <application>pkgconfig</application> package contains
  -tools for passing the include path and/or library path to the compiler during 
  -the make script.</para>
  +tools for passing the include path and/or library paths to build tools during 
  +the make file execution.</para>
   
   <sect3><title>Package information</title>
   <itemizedlist spacing='compact'>
  
  
  
  1.2       +1 -1      BLFS/BOOK/general/sysutils/zip/zip-desc.xml
  
  Index: zip-desc.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/general/sysutils/zip/zip-desc.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.1
  retrieving revision 1.2
  diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
  --- zip-desc.xml	5 Oct 2003 09:16:42 -0000	1.1
  +++ zip-desc.xml	31 May 2004 22:41:23 -0000	1.2
  @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
   
   <sect3><title>zipnote</title>
   <para><command>zipnote</command> reads or writes comments stored in a
  -<filename>ZIP</filename> file .</para></sect3>
  +<filename>ZIP</filename> file.</para></sect3>
   
   <sect3><title>zipsplit</title>
   <para><command>zipsplit</command> is a utility to split
  
  
  
  1.2       +1 -1      BLFS/BOOK/general/sysutils/zip/zip-exp.xml
  
  Index: zip-exp.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/general/sysutils/zip/zip-exp.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.1
  retrieving revision 1.2
  diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
  --- zip-exp.xml	5 Oct 2003 09:16:42 -0000	1.1
  +++ zip-exp.xml	31 May 2004 22:41:23 -0000	1.2
  @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <filename class='directory'>/usr/local</filename> in the
   <filename>Makefile</filename>
   and builds the executables for a linux system.  The alternatives to
  -'generic_gcc' can be seen with a 'make list' command.</para>
  +'generic_gcc' can be seen with a <command>make list</command> command.</para>
   
   </sect2>
   
  
  
  



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