cvs commit: BLFS/BOOK/server/other/xinetd xinetd-config.xml

bdubbs at linuxfromscratch.org bdubbs at linuxfromscratch.org
Sun May 30 13:07:13 PDT 2004


bdubbs      04/05/30 14:07:13

  Modified:    BOOK/general/genlib/aspell aspell-config.xml
               BOOK/general/genlib/ispell ispell-inst.xml
               BOOK/general/graphlib/directfb directfb-inst.xml
               BOOK/general/graphlib/libpng libpng-exp.xml
               BOOK/general/graphlib/libtiff libtiff-exp.xml
                        libtiff-inst.xml
               BOOK/general/graphlib/libungif libungif-desc.xml
               BOOK/general/graphlib/svgalib svgalib-exp.xml
                        svgalib-inst.xml
               BOOK/gnome/core/libbonobo libbonobo-exp.xml
               BOOK/pst/typesetting/tex tex-exp.xml
               BOOK/server/other/bind bind-config.xml
               BOOK/server/other/xinetd xinetd-config.xml
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  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.7       +2 -2      BLFS/BOOK/general/genlib/aspell/aspell-config.xml
  
  Index: aspell-config.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/general/genlib/aspell/aspell-config.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.6
  retrieving revision 1.7
  diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
  --- aspell-config.xml	3 Sep 2003 02:28:59 -0000	1.6
  +++ aspell-config.xml	30 May 2004 20:07:12 -0000	1.7
  @@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
   
   <sect3><title>Configuration Information</title>
   
  -<para>After <application>Aspell</application> is installed at least one 
  -dictionary needs to be installed. You can find them at <ulink url="http://aspell.net/"/>.</para>
  +<para>After <application>Aspell</application> is installed, at least one 
  +dictionary needs to be set up. You can find them at <ulink url="http://aspell.net/"/>.</para>
   
   <para>Install your dictionary or dictionaries by running the following commands:</para>
   <screen><userinput><command>./configure &&
  
  
  
  1.4       +3 -3      BLFS/BOOK/general/genlib/ispell/ispell-inst.xml
  
  Index: ispell-inst.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/general/genlib/ispell/ispell-inst.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.3
  retrieving revision 1.4
  diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
  --- ispell-inst.xml	3 Oct 2003 02:46:08 -0000	1.3
  +++ ispell-inst.xml	30 May 2004 20:07:12 -0000	1.4
  @@ -5,9 +5,9 @@
   
   <screen><userinput><command>sed -e "s:/usr/local:/usr:g" local.h.linux > local.h</command></userinput></screen>
   
  -<para>By default, <application>ispell</application> only installs American
  -English dictionary. To install other languages, check out the <filename>config.X</filename> file
  -for the define to append to <filename>local.h</filename>.</para>
  +<para>By default, <application>ispell</application> only installs an American
  +English dictionary. To set up other languages, check out the <filename>config.X</filename> file
  +for the #define entry to append to <filename>local.h</filename>.</para>
   
   <para>Compile and install <application>ispell</application> using the
   following commands:</para>
  
  
  
  1.7       +2 -2      BLFS/BOOK/general/graphlib/directfb/directfb-inst.xml
  
  Index: directfb-inst.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/general/graphlib/directfb/directfb-inst.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.6
  retrieving revision 1.7
  diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
  --- directfb-inst.xml	2 Nov 2003 12:45:02 -0000	1.6
  +++ directfb-inst.xml	30 May 2004 20:07:12 -0000	1.7
  @@ -14,8 +14,8 @@
   make &&
   make install</command></userinput></screen>
   
  -<para>If you decided to add optional image and video providers then you
  -have to install DirectFB-extra package too:</para>
  +<para>If you decided to add any optional image and video providers, then you
  +have to install the DirectFB-extra package too:</para>
   
   <screen><userinput><command>./configure --prefix=/usr &&
   make &&
  
  
  
  1.7       +3 -4      BLFS/BOOK/general/graphlib/libpng/libpng-exp.xml
  
  Index: libpng-exp.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/general/graphlib/libpng/libpng-exp.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.6
  retrieving revision 1.7
  diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
  --- libpng-exp.xml	2 Oct 2003 22:40:44 -0000	1.6
  +++ libpng-exp.xml	30 May 2004 20:07:12 -0000	1.7
  @@ -5,10 +5,9 @@
   forces <application>libpng</application> to look for the
   <application>zlib</application> includes and libraries where we have them installed.</para>
   
  -<para><parameter>-f scripts/makefile.linux</parameter>: This points
  -make at the Linux version of the makefile as
  -<application>libpng</application> doesn't use a
  -autoconf routine instead coming with various makefiles for different
  +<para><parameter>-f scripts/makefile.linux</parameter>: This points make at the
  +Linux version of the makefile as <application>libpng</application> doesn't use
  +an autoconf routine. Instead it has various makefiles for different
   platforms.</para>
   
   
  
  
  
  1.9       +12 -13    BLFS/BOOK/general/graphlib/libtiff/libtiff-exp.xml
  
  Index: libtiff-exp.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/general/graphlib/libtiff/libtiff-exp.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.8
  retrieving revision 1.9
  diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
  --- libtiff-exp.xml	13 Mar 2004 15:08:51 -0000	1.8
  +++ libtiff-exp.xml	30 May 2004 20:07:12 -0000	1.9
  @@ -3,21 +3,20 @@
   
   <para><option>--noninteractive</option>: This switch is used to
   avoid the configuration routine asking for confirmation of the
  -directories to install to (which we pass using switches to configure
  -anyways).</para> 
  +installation directories (which we pass to configure).</para> 
   
  -<para><parameter>--with-DIR_MAN=/usr/share/man</parameter>: This is
  -used because despite the fact we pass
  -<parameter>--prefix=/usr</parameter>, the configure
  -routine tries to install the man pages in
  -<filename class="directory">/usr/local/man</filename> instead of the
  -correct place.</para>
  +<para><parameter>--with-DIR_MAN=/usr/share/man</parameter>: This is used
  +because despite the fact we pass <parameter>--prefix=/usr</parameter>, the
  +configure routine tries to install the man pages in <filename
  +class="directory">/usr/local/man</filename> instead of the correct
  +place.</para>
   
  -<para><parameter>--with-ZIP=yes --with-DIR_GZLIB=/usr/lib</parameter>: This enables support for
  -the handling of <acronym>TIFF</acronym> images with deflate-encoded data.</para>
  +<para><parameter>--with-ZIP=yes --with-DIR_GZLIB=/usr/lib</parameter>: This
  +enables support for the handling of <acronym>TIFF</acronym> images with
  +deflate-encoded data.</para>
   
  -<para><parameter>--with-JPEG=yes --with-DIR_JPEGLIB=/usr/lib</parameter>:
  -Use these switches to enable support for the handling of
  -<acronym>TIFF</acronym> images with <acronym>JPEG</acronym>-encoded data.</para>
  +<para><parameter>--with-JPEG=yes --with-DIR_JPEGLIB=/usr/lib</parameter>: Use
  +these switches to enable support for the handling of <acronym>TIFF</acronym>
  +images with <acronym>JPEG</acronym>-encoded data.</para>
   
   </sect2>
  
  
  
  1.10      +4 -5      BLFS/BOOK/general/graphlib/libtiff/libtiff-inst.xml
  
  Index: libtiff-inst.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/general/graphlib/libtiff/libtiff-inst.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.9
  retrieving revision 1.10
  diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10
  --- libtiff-inst.xml	13 Mar 2004 15:08:51 -0000	1.9
  +++ libtiff-inst.xml	30 May 2004 20:07:12 -0000	1.10
  @@ -9,10 +9,9 @@
   make &&
   make install</command></userinput></screen>
   
  -<note><para>configure prints a false error message that it is unable
  -to find the library directories for ZIP (and JPEG) support. Ignore
  -them. To verify that <filename>libtiff</filename> is indeed linked
  -to these libraries, you can use <command>ldd</command> to verify
  -that it is indeed linked against these.</para></note>
  +<note><para>configure prints false error messages that it is unable to find the
  +library directories for ZIP (and JPEG) support. Ignore them. To verify that
  +<filename>libtiff</filename> is indeed linked to these libraries, use the
  +<command>ldd</command> command.</para></note>
   
   </sect2>
  
  
  
  1.6       +3 -3      BLFS/BOOK/general/graphlib/libungif/libungif-desc.xml
  
  Index: libungif-desc.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/general/graphlib/libungif/libungif-desc.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.5
  retrieving revision 1.6
  diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
  --- libungif-desc.xml	14 Sep 2003 20:28:20 -0000	1.5
  +++ libungif-desc.xml	30 May 2004 20:07:12 -0000	1.6
  @@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
   <para>Dumps images saved as <acronym>GIF</acronym> files on Epson type printers.</para></sect3>
   
   <sect3><title>gif2ps</title>
  -<para>Print <acronym>GIF</acronym> file on laser printers supporting PostScript.
  +<para>Print <acronym>GIF</acronym> files on laser printers supporting PostScript.
   </para></sect3>
   
   <sect3><title>gif2rgb</title>
  @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
   </acronym> image(s).</para></sect3>
   
   <sect3><title>gifasm</title>
  -<para>assemble multiple <acronym>GIF</acronym>s into one, or burst a 
  +<para>Assemble multiple <acronym>GIF</acronym>s into one, or burst a 
   multiple-image <acronym>GIF</acronym>.</para></sect3>
   
   <sect3><title>gifbg</title>
  @@ -80,7 +80,7 @@
   <para>Gives information on a <acronym>GIF</acronym> file.</para></sect3>
   
   <sect3><title>gifinter</title>
  -<para>Convert between interlaced and non interlaced images.</para></sect3>
  +<para>Convert between interlaced and non-interlaced images.</para></sect3>
   
   <sect3><title>gifinto</title>
   <para>End-of-pipe fitting for <acronym>GIF</acronym>-processing pipelines.</para></sect3>
  
  
  
  1.6       +2 -2      BLFS/BOOK/general/graphlib/svgalib/svgalib-exp.xml
  
  Index: svgalib-exp.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/general/graphlib/svgalib/svgalib-exp.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.5
  retrieving revision 1.6
  diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
  --- svgalib-exp.xml	2 Oct 2003 22:40:44 -0000	1.5
  +++ svgalib-exp.xml	30 May 2004 20:07:12 -0000	1.6
  @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
   
   <para><command>cd doc && for dir in man?; do for file in $dir/*; do
   gunzip /usr/share/man/$file; done; done</command>:
  -<application>SVGAlib</application> installs it's man
  -pages in compressed format so we uncompress them.</para>
  +<application>SVGAlib</application> installs its man pages in compressed format
  +so we uncompress them.</para>
   
   </sect2>
  
  
  
  1.5       +5 -5      BLFS/BOOK/general/graphlib/svgalib/svgalib-inst.xml
  
  Index: svgalib-inst.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/general/graphlib/svgalib/svgalib-inst.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.4
  retrieving revision 1.5
  diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
  --- svgalib-inst.xml	5 Oct 2003 17:24:33 -0000	1.4
  +++ svgalib-inst.xml	30 May 2004 20:07:12 -0000	1.5
  @@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
   <sect2>
   <title>Installation of <application>SVGAlib</application></title>
   
  -<note><para>You must compile and install as root. If you don't nothing bad
  -will happen during compilation, but certain tools won't be able to
  -become <acronym>SUID</acronym> root which is required for proper operation. However,
  -this raises a risk of exposing your system to any holes in those
  -tools that might be used to gain root access so use with caution.</para></note>
  +<note><para>You must compile and install as root. If you don't, certain tools
  +won't be able to become <acronym>SUID</acronym> root which is required for
  +proper operation. However, this raises a risk of exposing your system to any
  +holes in those tools that might be used to gain root access, so use with
  +caution.</para></note>
   
   <para>Install <application>SVGAlib</application> by running the following commands:</para>
   
  
  
  
  1.2       +1 -1      BLFS/BOOK/gnome/core/libbonobo/libbonobo-exp.xml
  
  Index: libbonobo-exp.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/gnome/core/libbonobo/libbonobo-exp.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.1
  retrieving revision 1.2
  diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
  --- libbonobo-exp.xml	25 Apr 2004 17:08:57 -0000	1.1
  +++ libbonobo-exp.xml	30 May 2004 20:07:12 -0000	1.2
  @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
   
   <para><parameter>--prefix=`pkg-config --variable=prefix
   ORBit-2.0`</parameter>: Setting the prefix with this command instead of
  -with <envar>GNOME_PREFIX</envar> will insure that the prefix is
  +with <envar>GNOME_PREFIX</envar> will ensure that the prefix is
   consistent with the installation environment.</para>
   
   <para><parameter>--libexecdir=`pkg-config --variable=prefix ORBit-2.0`/sbin</parameter>: This switch puts libexec files in 
  
  
  
  1.10      +2 -3      BLFS/BOOK/pst/typesetting/tex/tex-exp.xml
  
  Index: tex-exp.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/pst/typesetting/tex/tex-exp.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.9
  retrieving revision 1.10
  diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10
  --- tex-exp.xml	2 Dec 2003 23:45:46 -0000	1.9
  +++ tex-exp.xml	30 May 2004 20:07:12 -0000	1.10
  @@ -12,9 +12,8 @@
   <command>xdvi</command>.  If this is desired, remove this
   configure option.</para>
   
  -<para><parameter>--exec-prefix=/usr --bindir=/usr/bin</parameter>: This
  -switch will insure
  -that <application>TeX</application> binaries will be installed in 
  +<para><parameter>--exec-prefix=/usr --bindir=/usr/bin</parameter>: This switch
  +will ensure that <application>TeX</application> binaries will be installed in
   <filename class="directory">/usr/bin</filename>.</para>
   
   <para><option>--without-texinfo</option>: A default
  
  
  
  1.16      +1 -1      BLFS/BOOK/server/other/bind/bind-config.xml
  
  Index: bind-config.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/server/other/bind/bind-config.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.15
  retrieving revision 1.16
  diff -u -r1.15 -r1.16
  --- bind-config.xml	18 May 2004 15:56:47 -0000	1.15
  +++ bind-config.xml	30 May 2004 20:07:13 -0000	1.16
  @@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
   <para>Create the <filename>root.hints</filename> file with the following
   commands:</para>
   
  -<note><para>Caution must be used to insure no leading spaces in this
  +<note><para>Caution must be used to ensure no leading spaces in this
   file.</para></note>
   
   <screen><userinput><command>cat > /home/named/etc/namedb/root.hints << "EOF"</command>
  
  
  
  1.13      +1 -1      BLFS/BOOK/server/other/xinetd/xinetd-config.xml
  
  Index: xinetd-config.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/server/other/xinetd/xinetd-config.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.12
  retrieving revision 1.13
  diff -u -r1.12 -r1.13
  --- xinetd-config.xml	28 Mar 2004 01:46:42 -0000	1.12
  +++ xinetd-config.xml	30 May 2004 20:07:13 -0000	1.13
  @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
   
   <sect3><title>Configuration Information</title>
   
  -<para>Insure the path to all daemons are in <filename
  +<para>Ensure the path to all daemons are in <filename
   class="directory">/usr/sbin</filename>, rather than the default path of
   <filename class="directory">/usr/etc</filename>:</para>
   
  
  
  



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