cvs commit: BLFS/BOOK/x/wm/fluxbox fluxbox-intro.xml

igor at linuxfromscratch.org igor at linuxfromscratch.org
Sun May 30 02:34:58 PDT 2004


igor        04/05/30 03:34:58

  Modified:    BOOK/general/genlib/expat expat.ent
               BOOK/postlfs/config compressdoc.xml
               BOOK/server/other/samba3 samba3-desc.xml
               BOOK/x/wm/fluxbox fluxbox-intro.xml
  Log:
  more grammar/spelling fixes
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.10      +0 -1      BLFS/BOOK/general/genlib/expat/expat.ent
  
  Index: expat.ent
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  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/general/genlib/expat/expat.ent,v
  retrieving revision 1.9
  retrieving revision 1.10
  diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10
  --- expat.ent	30 May 2004 05:30:46 -0000	1.9
  +++ expat.ent	30 May 2004 09:34:58 -0000	1.10
  @@ -4,7 +4,6 @@
   <!ENTITY expat-desc SYSTEM "expat-desc.xml">
   <!ENTITY expat-version "1.95.7">
   <!ENTITY expat-download-http "http://umn.dl.sourceforge.net/sourceforge/expat/expat-&expat-version;.tar.gz">
  -<!-- <!ENTITY expat-download-ftp "ftp://ftp.at.linuxfromscratch.org/opsys/linux/sf/e/expat/expat-&expat-version;.tar.gz"> -->
   <!ENTITY expat-download-ftp " ">
   <!ENTITY expat-size "290 KB">
   <!ENTITY expat-buildsize "3.2 MB">
  
  
  
  1.21      +3 -3      BLFS/BOOK/postlfs/config/compressdoc.xml
  
  Index: compressdoc.xml
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  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/postlfs/config/compressdoc.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.20
  retrieving revision 1.21
  diff -u -r1.20 -r1.21
  --- compressdoc.xml	30 May 2004 09:16:17 -0000	1.20
  +++ compressdoc.xml	30 May 2004 09:34:58 -0000	1.21
  @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   
   <para>Man and info reader programs can transparently process gzip'ed or
   bzip2'ed pages, a feature you can use to free some disk space while keeping
  -your documentation available. However, things are not that simple: man
  +your documentation available. However, things are not that simple; man
   directories tend to contain links - hard and symbolic - which defeat simple
   ideas like recursively calling <command>gzip</command> on them. A better way 
   to go is to use the script below.
  @@ -462,7 +462,7 @@
   comprehensive help about what the script is able to do.</para>
   
   <para> Don't forget that a few programs, like the <application>X</application> 
  -Window system and <application>XEmacs</application> also install their 
  +Window System and <application>XEmacs</application> also install their 
   documentation in non standard places (such as <filename class="directory"> 
   /usr/X11R6/man</filename>, etc...). Be sure to add these locations to the 
   file <filename>/etc/man.conf</filename>, as a
  @@ -478,7 +478,7 @@
   <para>Generally, package installation systems do not compress man/info pages, 
   which means you will need to run the script again if you want to keep the size 
   of your documentation as small as possible. Also, note that running the script
  -after upgrading a package is safe: when you have several versions of a page 
  +after upgrading a package is safe; when you have several versions of a page 
   (for example, one compressed and one uncompressed), the most recent one is kept
   and the others deleted.</para>
   
  
  
  
  1.4       +1 -1      BLFS/BOOK/server/other/samba3/samba3-desc.xml
  
  Index: samba3-desc.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/server/other/samba3/samba3-desc.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.3
  retrieving revision 1.4
  diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
  --- samba3-desc.xml	17 May 2004 08:59:51 -0000	1.3
  +++ samba3-desc.xml	30 May 2004 09:34:58 -0000	1.4
  @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
   binary, for use in mapping characters to 16 bit Unicode.</para></sect3>
   <sect3><title>mount.smbfs</title>
   <para><command>mount.smbfs</command> provides <command>/bin/mount</command> 
  -with a way to mount remote windows (or samba) fileshares.</para></sect3>
  +with a way to mount remote Windows (or Samba) fileshares.</para></sect3>
   <sect3><title>net</title>
   <para><command>net</command> is a tool for administration of Samba and remote
   CIFS servers, similar to the net utility for DOS/Windows.</para></sect3>
  
  
  
  1.8       +1 -1      BLFS/BOOK/x/wm/fluxbox/fluxbox-intro.xml
  
  Index: fluxbox-intro.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/x/wm/fluxbox/fluxbox-intro.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.7
  retrieving revision 1.8
  diff -u -r1.7 -r1.8
  --- fluxbox-intro.xml	13 May 2004 14:32:28 -0000	1.7
  +++ fluxbox-intro.xml	30 May 2004 09:34:58 -0000	1.8
  @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
   <sect2>
   <title>Introduction to <application>Fluxbox</application></title>
   
  -<para>The <application>Fluxbox</application> package contains a windows manager.
  +<para>The <application>Fluxbox</application> package contains a window manager.
   </para>
   
   <sect3><title>Package information</title>
  
  
  



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