cvs commit: BLFS/BOOK/packages/x xfree86-inst.xml

bdubbs at linuxfromscratch.org bdubbs at linuxfromscratch.org
Thu Jul 4 10:48:22 PDT 2002


bdubbs      02/07/04 10:48:22

  Modified:    BOOK/appendixa symlinks.xml
               BOOK/chapter01 changelog.xml
               BOOK/chapter05 chapter05.xml
               BOOK/packages/g glib-intro.xml glib2-intro.xml
               BOOK/packages/k kde-graphics.xml kde-multimedia.xml
                        kde-network.xml
               BOOK/packages/x xfree86-inst.xml
  Log:
  various type and grammer fixes
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.2       +3 -3      BLFS/BOOK/appendixa/symlinks.xml
  
  Index: symlinks.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/appendixa/symlinks.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.1
  retrieving revision 1.2
  diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
  --- symlinks.xml	25 Mar 2002 21:05:11 -0000	1.1
  +++ symlinks.xml	4 Jul 2002 17:48:21 -0000	1.2
  @@ -4,9 +4,9 @@
   
   <para>This page lists all of the symlinks used by the lfs-bootscripts
   package (correct as of version <userinput>1.9</userinput>) and all of
  -the scripts in the BLFS book.  This is for two reasons.  Firstly, so that
  -you can see at a glance which number we have used for each package.
  -Secondly so that <emphasis>we</emphasis> can see which number we have
  +the scripts in the BLFS book.  This is for two reasons:  first, so that
  +you can see at a glance which number we have used for each package, and
  +second so that <emphasis>we</emphasis> can see which number we have
   used for each package!  Without this, it would make our lives more
   difficult (as we'd probably end up with conflicts).</para>
   
  
  
  
  1.128     +3 -0      BLFS/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
  
  Index: changelog.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.127
  retrieving revision 1.128
  diff -u -r1.127 -r1.128
  --- changelog.xml	4 Jul 2002 10:13:23 -0000	1.127
  +++ changelog.xml	4 Jul 2002 17:48:22 -0000	1.128
  @@ -10,6 +10,9 @@
   
   <itemizedlist>
   
  +<listitem><para>July 4, 2002 [bdubbs]: Various typo and 
  +grammer changes.</para></listitem>
  +
   <listitem><para>July 4, 2002 [bdubbs]: KDE section - updated 
   koffice patch instruction and added a backslash to kdelibs
   build commands. Successfully rebuilt kde 3.0.2 with current
  
  
  
  1.11      +5 -3      BLFS/BOOK/chapter05/chapter05.xml
  
  Index: chapter05.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/chapter05/chapter05.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.10
  retrieving revision 1.11
  diff -u -r1.10 -r1.11
  --- chapter05.xml	16 May 2002 20:38:46 -0000	1.10
  +++ chapter05.xml	4 Jul 2002 17:48:22 -0000	1.11
  @@ -7,9 +7,11 @@
   <title>Introduction</title>
   
   <para>This chapter contains information on basic software which didn't
  -really fit anywhere else.  Some of it, such as ALSA and gpm, are
  -useful for compiling later software, for example, gpm needs to be
  -installed before links if you want links to have mouse support.</para>
  +really fit anywhere else.  Some of it, such as <filename>ALSA</filename>
  +and <filename>gpm</filename>, are
  +useful for compiling later software. For example, gpm needs to be
  +installed before <filename>links</filename> if you want 
  +<filename>links</filename> to have mouse support.</para>
   
   <para>Here is a complete list of what is included in this
   chapter:</para>
  
  
  
  1.2       +1 -1      BLFS/BOOK/packages/g/glib-intro.xml
  
  Index: glib-intro.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/packages/g/glib-intro.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.1
  retrieving revision 1.2
  diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
  --- glib-intro.xml	29 Jun 2002 22:40:55 -0000	1.1
  +++ glib-intro.xml	4 Jul 2002 17:48:22 -0000	1.2
  @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
   Estimated Disk space required:  &GLib-buildsize;</screen>
   
   <para>The glib package contains a low-level core library. This is useful
  -for providing data structure handling for C, portablilty wrapperss and
  +for providing data structure handling for C, portablilty wrappers and
   interfaces for such runtime functionality as an event loop, threads,
   dynamic loading, and an object system.</para>
   
  
  
  
  1.2       +1 -1      BLFS/BOOK/packages/g/glib2-intro.xml
  
  Index: glib2-intro.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/packages/g/glib2-intro.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.1
  retrieving revision 1.2
  diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
  --- glib2-intro.xml	29 Jun 2002 22:53:54 -0000	1.1
  +++ glib2-intro.xml	4 Jul 2002 17:48:22 -0000	1.2
  @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
   Estimated Disk space required:  &GLib2-buildsize;</screen>
   
   <para>The glib package contains a low-level core library. This is useful
  -for providing data structure handling for C, portablilty wrapperss and
  +for providing data structure handling for C, portablilty wrappers and
   interfaces for such runtime functionality as an event loop, threads,
   dynamic loading, and an object system.</para>
   
  
  
  
  1.4       +1 -1      BLFS/BOOK/packages/k/kde-graphics.xml
  
  Index: kde-graphics.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/packages/k/kde-graphics.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.3
  retrieving revision 1.4
  diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
  --- kde-graphics.xml	3 Jul 2002 17:15:26 -0000	1.3
  +++ kde-graphics.xml	4 Jul 2002 17:48:22 -0000	1.4
  @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
   make &&
   make install</userinput></screen></para>
   
  -<sect4><title>kdemultimedia Installation Commmand explanations</title>
  +<sect4><title>kdegraphics Installation Commmand explanations</title>
   <para>The options are the same as for aRts and are not repeated here.</para>
   </sect4>
   
  
  
  
  1.4       +3 -3      BLFS/BOOK/packages/k/kde-multimedia.xml
  
  Index: kde-multimedia.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/packages/k/kde-multimedia.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.3
  retrieving revision 1.4
  diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
  --- kde-multimedia.xml	3 Jul 2002 17:15:26 -0000	1.3
  +++ kde-multimedia.xml	4 Jul 2002 17:48:22 -0000	1.4
  @@ -26,10 +26,10 @@
   <para>There is no explicit configuration for the kde multimedia package, however Kscd 
   needs to find the CD drive.  The default is <filename>/dev/cdrom</filename> which
   may not exist on your system.  The easiest way to do this is to create a 
  -symblolic link from your CD drive (e.g. <filename>/dev/hdc</filename>, 
  -<filename>/dev/scd0</filename>, etc) to <filename>/dev/cdrom</filename>.
  +symblolic to from your CD drive (e.g. <filename>/dev/hdc</filename>, 
  +<filename>/dev/scd0</filename>, etc) from <filename>/dev/cdrom</filename>.
   <screen><userinput>cd /dev &&
  -ln -s <CD drive> /dev/cdrom</userinput></screen>
  +ln -s "CD Drive" /dev/cdrom</userinput></screen>
   </para>
   </sect4>
   
  
  
  
  1.4       +1 -1      BLFS/BOOK/packages/k/kde-network.xml
  
  Index: kde-network.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/packages/k/kde-network.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.3
  retrieving revision 1.4
  diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
  --- kde-network.xml	3 Jul 2002 17:15:26 -0000	1.3
  +++ kde-network.xml	4 Jul 2002 17:48:22 -0000	1.4
  @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
   make &&
   make install</userinput></screen></para>
   
  -<sect4><title>kdemultimedia Installation Commmand explanations</title>
  +<sect4><title>kdenetwork Installation Commmand explanations</title>
   <para>The options are the same as for aRts and are not repeated here.</para>
   </sect4>
   
  
  
  
  1.4       +1 -1      BLFS/BOOK/packages/x/xfree86-inst.xml
  
  Index: xfree86-inst.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/BLFS/BOOK/packages/x/xfree86-inst.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.3
  retrieving revision 1.4
  diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
  --- xfree86-inst.xml	24 May 2002 02:20:42 -0000	1.3
  +++ xfree86-inst.xml	4 Jul 2002 17:48:22 -0000	1.4
  @@ -73,7 +73,7 @@
   
   
   /* This setting reduces compile time a little by omitting rarely used input 
  - * devices.  Tou can find the complete list in config/cf/xfree86.cf ********/
  + * devices.  You can find the complete list in config/cf/xfree86.cf ********/
    
   #define XInputDrivers                 mouse void
   
  
  
  
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