r2430 - in jhalfs/branches/experimental: CLFS common

georgeb at linuxfromscratch.org georgeb at linuxfromscratch.org
Mon Mar 27 16:01:52 PST 2006


Author: georgeb
Date: 2006-03-27 17:01:50 -0700 (Mon, 27 Mar 2006)
New Revision: 2430

Modified:
   jhalfs/branches/experimental/CLFS/master.sh
   jhalfs/branches/experimental/common/common-functions
   jhalfs/branches/experimental/common/makefile-functions
Log:
grammar correction

Modified: jhalfs/branches/experimental/CLFS/master.sh
===================================================================
--- jhalfs/branches/experimental/CLFS/master.sh	2006-03-27 23:49:09 UTC (rev 2429)
+++ jhalfs/branches/experimental/CLFS/master.sh	2006-03-28 00:01:50 UTC (rev 2430)
@@ -283,7 +283,6 @@
     PREV=$this_script
 
   done
-  echo -e "\t@\$(call echo_boot_finished,$VERSION)" >> $MKFILE.tmp
 }
 
 

Modified: jhalfs/branches/experimental/common/common-functions
===================================================================
--- jhalfs/branches/experimental/common/common-functions	2006-03-27 23:49:09 UTC (rev 2429)
+++ jhalfs/branches/experimental/common/common-functions	2006-03-28 00:01:50 UTC (rev 2430)
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
 
 ${BOLD}  --dependencies  0/1/2${OFF}
         add dependencies of type TYPE to the build tree.
-        If not set, both required a recommended are used.
+        If not set, both required and recommended are used.
 
                   Possible values are:
         0 - required        only required dependecies are used

Modified: jhalfs/branches/experimental/common/makefile-functions
===================================================================
--- jhalfs/branches/experimental/common/makefile-functions	2006-03-27 23:49:09 UTC (rev 2429)
+++ jhalfs/branches/experimental/common/makefile-functions	2006-03-28 00:01:50 UTC (rev 2430)
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@
   @echo that you already know and there is no need to discuss it here.
   @echo $(BOLD)
   @echo $(BOLD)$(YELLOW)
-  @echo  1.If necessary transfer the newly created partition to the target machine
+  @echo  1.If it is necessary, transfer the newly created partition to the target machine
   @echo  2.Boot the new partition. 
   @echo  3.Once you are logged in issue the following cmds
   @echo -e \\t $(BOLD})cd /jhahlfs




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