r2942 - jhalfs/trunk

georgeb at linuxfromscratch.org georgeb at linuxfromscratch.org
Sun Aug 13 13:57:30 PDT 2006


Author: georgeb
Date: 2006-08-13 14:57:30 -0600 (Sun, 13 Aug 2006)
New Revision: 2942

Modified:
   jhalfs/trunk/README.BLFS
Log:
README.BLFS: a few spelling mistakes and touch up some grammar

Modified: jhalfs/trunk/README.BLFS
===================================================================
--- jhalfs/trunk/README.BLFS	2006-08-13 18:24:16 UTC (rev 2941)
+++ jhalfs/trunk/README.BLFS	2006-08-13 20:57:30 UTC (rev 2942)
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
   general rule you will need to review and edit the scripts while reading
   the book.
 
-  NOTE:: The code is yet under development a may contains several bugs
+  NOTE:: The code is still under development and may contains several bugs
 
 
 2. USAGE::
@@ -54,13 +54,14 @@
   2.3  PARSING THE BOOK::
        Next step is to create a book and build scripts in dependencies build order
     for a target package. A target package can be any of the ones listed in the
-    packages file. That is done using the blfs-parser.sh script, but we are triying
+    packages file. That is done using the blfs-parser.sh script, but we are trying
     to make a menuconfig based system.
 
        The script need three arguments:
 
     package name         as listed in packages file
-    dependencies level   1 for required, 2 for required an recommendedand,
+    dependencies level   1 for required, 
+                         2 for required an recommendedand,
                          3 for required, recommended, and optional
     sudo usage           y if sudo will be used (you will build as normal user)
                          n if sudo isn't needed (you will build as root)
@@ -82,8 +83,8 @@
     packages (i.e., for non-BLFS packages) can be inserted in an easy way.
 
   2.4  CREATING THE MAKEFILE
-       When the build scripts will be ready to be run, the Makefile can be
-  created. Be sure that you are into the "package" directory and run
+       When the build scripts are ready to be run, the Makefile can be
+  created. Be sure that you cd into the "package" directory and run
 
       ../gen_makefile.sh
 




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